Ronovan’s Weekly Haiku Challenge – #54 Free & Think

  
Time to haiku it up again! Check it out here! I am trying a tanka haiku today.

I’m Free

I think I’m free of

All those chains that bound me so

Liberated now

As I walk I feel so light

The world seems a different place.

Ritu 2015

24 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Vashti Quiroz-Vega
    Jul 29, 2015 @ 22:15:49

    Hi Ritu! Your poem gives the feeling of freedom. I felt my mind relax as I read it. Beautiful and peaceful. ❤

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  3. the secret keeper
    Jul 26, 2015 @ 06:54:53

    Lovely! Loved the flow & meaning of your words. jk 🙂

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  4. Prakash Hegade
    Jul 21, 2015 @ 19:09:03

    That was a lovely tanka! 🙂

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  5. edwinasepisodes
    Jul 21, 2015 @ 17:04:28

    That was a wonderful Haiku. Well done Ritu! 🙂

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  6. Erika Kind
    Jul 21, 2015 @ 10:00:57

    That was great, so great!!! You told my book in 5 lines!

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  7. Kreng Jai
    Jul 21, 2015 @ 08:59:08

    Rest it as were you plz typo, my iPad is a crazy gal. 😆

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  8. Kreng Jai
    Jul 21, 2015 @ 08:58:19

    A good one. But we’re you really bound?😀

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  9. wafflemethis
    Jul 21, 2015 @ 07:15:09

    You did good☺

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  10. wafflemethis
    Jul 21, 2015 @ 07:09:38

    I thought that was gonna be a tidbit when it appeared. But wow what a totally amazing Haiku it was beautiful. You blew it away with that one☺

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