FRIDAY FICTION with RONOVAN WRITES Prompt Challenge #25-A guest appearance.

Friday Fiction with Ronovan Writes

Ronovan has his new prompt for his Friday Fiction challenge. Check it out here.

  • Word Count is off! Let’s focus on the theme of the thing. Not many actually stick to the word count anyway. (SUGGESTED-No more than 500 if you want to try that.)
  • Using the prompt of ‘A Guest Appearance, WRITE. Who might show up at your house? Or is there a show you are watching and a celebrity appears on screen? Maybe you are someplace and someone comes on stage that makes no sense. What do you do? How does it make you feel?(REQUIRED)

Time for a Lara update!

Just Friends Part 15
So far the concert had been amazing!
Christian had been there, at the other side of the entrance, waiting for her, and after a quick drink, they had entered the venue.
They had really good seats too, near the front, thanks to one of Christian’s regular yoga clients, who worked at the O2, and pulled a few strings, so Lara was in her element, singing along to all the classics.
She wasn’t the only one.
The whole place was filled with people of a certain age… all reminiscing times gone by. Lara was by no means one of the eldest there, she had been more of an Old Skool R’n’B fan at university, so the vast majority of the crowd were 40-somethings reliving their youth!
A couple of times she looked over at Christian, and caught him staring at her intently, then he’d smile, and look away, nodding his head to the music.
A concert probably wasn’t the ideal place for a first date as such. The noise levels were so extreme that you couldn’t really chat, and where there was music, Lara was never one to miss a chance to dance along, so she bopped her way through the first hour of the concert.
The band took a break, and Christian thought it would be a good time to have a conversation.
“I hope this is all ok, Lara,” he said.
“Oh my God, I am totally in my element! Thank you so much for this Christian! I can’t believe you remembered that I liked this band!”
“Yeah, well, I remembered quite a few things about you from back then,” he coloured slightly as if embarrassed to admit his feelings. “Your obsession with Benetton bags, the Doc Marten phase you went through, those cute glasses you wore when you couldn’t be bothered with contact lenses first thing in the morning after a late night…”
Now it was time for Lara to flush. “Er, wow, you really did take note of stuff, didn’t you!” She looked up at him, and he took a step closer to her.
“I just kick myself that I didn’t approach you at that time. But hey, we’re here now, and it’s like Fate brought us back together for a reason…” He leant in, lips searching for hers as the lights started flashing around the arena.
The band were on and they started up the music, along with an announcement.
“Hey y’all! We’re so happy to be playing for y’all tonight, and as a surprise, we have a very special guest, who has flown in to perform with us, a one night only exclusive…. Ladies and Gentlemen, we give you…. Keith Sweat!!!”
Before Christian had a chance to even touch his lips to hers, Lara’s eyes lit up, she turned to the stage flinging her arms in the air, and in the process poked Christian in the eye! But she hadn’t even realised. Keith Sweat was her all time favourite singer!!!

Any Feedback Gratefully Recieved!

The audio link, if you’d rather be read to!



18 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Judy Martin
    May 21, 2016 @ 09:30:03

    Oh Poor old Kris, getting poked in the eye just as he was going in for the kiss! 🙂

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  3. Hugh's Views and News
    May 08, 2016 @ 12:58:51

    Keith Sweat? What an unusual, but unique, name for a singer. So that kiss has still not happened. I don’t know about you, Ritu, but I’d have gone in for the kill 😱

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  4. Erika Kind
    May 07, 2016 @ 17:27:34

    Hahahaha…. that Lara! Cannot wait what happened to his eye…. lol! Sis, you are too cool to give that romantic direction such a dramatic twist… lol! The story goes on… yeah!

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