Friday Fiction With Ronovan Writes – #26 – A First Time

Oh yes, Friday night mean’s Lovely Ron’s Fiction prompt!

Friday Fiction with Ronovan Writes

  • Word Count is off! Let’s focus on the theme of the thing. Not many actually stick to the word count anyway. (SUGGESTED-No more than 500 if you want to try that.)
  • Using the prompt of ‘A First Time, WRITE. There are all kinds of first times, so get your minds out of the gutters. Channel that first experience doing something and put it into your characters. It could even be a first experience between two people. Next week I’m going to change it up a bit. Good luck. (REQUIRED)

Catch up with Lara’s love life here!

Just Friends – Part 16
Wincing in pain, Christian covered his freshly poked eye with the palm of his hand.
Breathe, he told himself. Use all that yoga training. Centre yourself, man!
Lara was in her element, still singing along to the songs, her eyes bright with excitement. He squinted his one good eye to look at her.  God, she really was beautiful. Why hadn’t he made his move all those years ago?
Keith Sweat started his hit song, Twisted and Christian grabbed Lara’s wrist, pulling her a little closer and placed two hands on her waist. He mouthed some of the lyrics to her,
“But I gotta be strong,
Girl, you did me wrong
When I thought we were really down
So you say you want me, girl
Make up your mind
Cus I’m not gonna be here for long”
Lara looked at Christian and saw something in his eyes. Aside from a slight redness in one eye, she hadn’t noticed that before, there was a fire burning within. She felt herself begin to mould to his body.
Christian brought his lips down and finally they locked lips.
Various fireworks appeared to go off in the background as Lara relaxed into his kiss, and returned the passion, snaking her arms around his neck, pulling him closer, and sliding her tongue in between his lips.
They stood there, locked in their moment for what seemed like forever until they became aware of loud cheering.
Separating, looking at each other with a little embarrassment, they glanced around, and realised that they were the centre of attention!
“I understand my music has been known to help others ‘get it on’ but dang, people! We got it all happening down here, right in front of us!”
There was Keith Sweat, himself, cheering them on! And when she glanced at the huge screen that was there to project the band, she was faced with a HUGE shot of her and Christian, mid-kiss!
Lara was so embarrassed to have lost herself like that in public! She picked her bag up and started to excuse herself out of the row. Christian realised she was leaving, and grabbing his jacket, he quickly followed her.
Out of the arena, she took a deep breath then went to walk off to the tube station.
Oh my God! How embarrassing! What had she done?! Kissed like that in public! She was the one who used to moan when Neil and Mya were sucking face in public, often having a secret debate with Amit about how tasteless it was, and now there she was, doing the same thing, although on a totally different scale!
In an arena with one of the most famous R’n’B singers giving them a shout out!
She felt herself jerk backwards as someone grabbed her arm.
Looking back, it was Christian.
“Look Lar, I know it might not have been quite the first time we were expecting, but you have to admit, it was good… I’ve wanted to do that for so long…”
And with that, he pulled her close and kissed her again.

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22 Comments (+add yours?)

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  2. Ronovan
    May 19, 2016 @ 18:50:52

    Very nicely done. 🙂 I was thinking first kiss, but wouldn’t have been surprised at first helicopter ride or something. 😀 Now where to take these two. Hmmm.

    Liked by 1 person


  3. reocochran
    May 17, 2016 @ 03:14:23

    This was very romantic and entertaining, Ritu. ❤

    Liked by 1 person


  4. Hugh's Views and News
    May 15, 2016 @ 12:40:13

    Drawn in again. I wait with baited breath now to find out what is going to happen to Lara next. Is the end in sight? Really?

    Liked by 1 person


  5. Erika Kind
    May 15, 2016 @ 11:22:45

    OMG!!!! Sis, this was most beautiful! I got totally lost in your story and the situation. You are a genius! You need to publish the whole series! You are amazing! This is soooooooo romantic 😍

    Liked by 1 person


  6. neelwritesblog
    May 14, 2016 @ 05:51:52

    You really enthralled me in the moment, sis!

    Liked by 1 person


  7. Deb
    May 14, 2016 @ 03:11:37

    It drew me in, I found it to be kind of hot, I enjoyed that. I like the chemistry between them, but Lara needs to chill a little. Great read! 🙂

    Liked by 1 person


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