Day 3 of the #JusJoJan challenge by Linda G Hill
The Just Jot It January 3rd prompt, brought to you by Dan Antion, of the blog “No Facilities,” is: “Warning.” Use it any way you’re inspired to. And make sure you stop by and say hi to Dan as well! Here’s his blog: https://nofacilities.com/
A twisted little limerick take on Jack and Jill! Sorry, not quite sure how my mind ended up on this, considering the prompt word!
Jack, Jill and Bill
There was a young girl called Jill
Who, with Jack, always went up the hill
Then one sunny morning
Without any warning
She went, instead, with Bill!Poor Jack was broken hearted
How had all this started?
That bump to the head
Had confined him to bed
Was this why they parted?Now this Bill, he was a stunner
But Jack, oh he was fun-ner
Bill loved his pouting
Jill started doubting
And so she did a runner!Well, Jack is back with Jill
They don’t go to that hill
Another they found
Less hill, more mound
But still as much of a thrill!Ritu 2017
But I Smile Anyway... 
Jan 07, 2017 @ 02:02:34
Hahaha! Oh, that’s lovely my dear. Thanks for the laugh. 😀 ❤
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Jan 07, 2017 @ 08:56:05
Thanks Linda! Love to raise a giggle!
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Jan 05, 2017 @ 05:04:43
You wrote a keeper for sure. So cute!
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Jan 05, 2017 @ 07:59:39
Glad you enjoyed, Oneta!!!!
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Jan 03, 2017 @ 23:17:40
I’ve heard that rhyme thousands of times in my life, but never your version. 😉
I like it!
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Jan 04, 2017 @ 07:56:40
Glad you enjoyed!!!!
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Jan 03, 2017 @ 22:52:49
Ah, ha, ha! What a fun poem, Ritu! Well done. 😀 xx
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Jan 03, 2017 @ 22:58:53
Glad you liked it! I had fun writing that!!!
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Jan 03, 2017 @ 23:52:53
It shows. 😉
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Jan 03, 2017 @ 23:53:38
😉
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Jan 03, 2017 @ 22:37:16
That was a lot of fun Ritu…enjoyed it very much…
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Jan 03, 2017 @ 22:56:59
I’m so glad you liked it! It was me being rather silly!
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Jan 03, 2017 @ 18:02:34
wooooohoooooooooo love it !!
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Jan 03, 2017 @ 18:38:47
Lol thanks!!!
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Jan 03, 2017 @ 17:31:54
Fabulous twist of irony. 😉
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Jan 03, 2017 @ 17:47:41
Glad you liked it Dorna!!!
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Jan 03, 2017 @ 15:36:37
Jill and Bill ??? Wasn’t meant to be. ☺
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Jan 03, 2017 @ 17:28:49
No… they just didn’t go!!!
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Jan 03, 2017 @ 12:18:53
I love it! A happy ending is always a plus.
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Jan 03, 2017 @ 12:19:36
Thanks Deb! For me, the sillier, the happier!
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Jan 03, 2017 @ 11:11:09
😂😂😂 I cannot stop laughing! You are a genius, Sis! That was absolutely outstanding!!!! 😂😂😂
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Jan 03, 2017 @ 12:16:43
He he! Thanks sis! Just me being a little silly again!!!
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Jan 03, 2017 @ 12:45:28
Keep up that silliness. You did amazing. Only creating a limerick is a great achievement and you did a whole load of them creating a story and so funny!!!
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Jan 03, 2017 @ 12:46:55
Behind the scenes of nursery rhymes!!!!
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Jan 03, 2017 @ 12:48:02
👍😄
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Jan 03, 2017 @ 10:58:26
Ha ha, Ritu, this is so funny. Tweeted it @bakeandwrite
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Jan 03, 2017 @ 11:03:55
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it!
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Jan 03, 2017 @ 09:24:59
The funny one. Liked it !
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Jan 03, 2017 @ 11:02:08
Thank you Masoom!
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Jan 03, 2017 @ 11:35:54
Welcome !
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Jan 03, 2017 @ 08:53:11
HaHA! Oh, what a fun take on the word Sis! 🙂
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Jan 03, 2017 @ 10:59:29
Lol! Thanks sis! Sometimes I do wonder… where does my mind go?
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Jan 03, 2017 @ 19:52:37
Same place as mine does at times!! 🙂
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Jan 03, 2017 @ 20:40:18
True indeed lol!!
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