Lovely Ron’s haiku prompt this week.
Beautiful & Curse
Beautiful flower
Hiding a curse that deepens
As each petal fallsRitu 2017
Being beautiful
A blessing and yet a curse
That fades with each dayRitu 2017
17 Apr 2017 25 Comments
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Lovely Ron’s haiku prompt this week.
Beautiful flower
Hiding a curse that deepens
As each petal fallsRitu 2017
Being beautiful
A blessing and yet a curse
That fades with each dayRitu 2017
Vashti Quiroz-Vega
Apr 21, 2017 @ 19:51:41
Two awesome haiku, my friend. The first tells an entire story and the second is an insightful truth. Bravo!
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Ritu
Apr 21, 2017 @ 19:56:40
Thank you so much Vashti!!! 💜💜💜
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dornahainds
Apr 18, 2017 @ 15:58:49
Fabulous, 2 times. 🌹🌹
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Ritu
Apr 18, 2017 @ 16:54:27
Thank you Dorna!!
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micketalbot
Apr 18, 2017 @ 14:34:34
Reblogged this on Mick E Talbot Poems and commented:
Life in a haiku
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syl65
Apr 18, 2017 @ 04:21:25
Love em Sister!!
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Ritu
Apr 18, 2017 @ 06:42:30
Thanks Brother!
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syl65
Apr 18, 2017 @ 14:13:21
You’re welcome Sister, always!!
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Fourth Generation Farmgirl
Apr 18, 2017 @ 01:33:17
Both haikus are wonderful! 🙂
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Ritu
Apr 18, 2017 @ 06:42:17
Thank you Tonya!
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willowdot21
Apr 17, 2017 @ 18:56:24
Love these both Sis so connected ! ❤
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Ritu
Apr 17, 2017 @ 19:26:10
Thanks sis xxx
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robbiesinspiration
Apr 17, 2017 @ 18:04:08
Excellent haikus. The second one is also so true!
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Ritu
Apr 17, 2017 @ 18:05:50
Thank you Robbie!!
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Reena Saxena
Apr 17, 2017 @ 17:07:08
Beautiful (without a curse) lines! 🙂
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Ritu
Apr 17, 2017 @ 17:27:49
Thank you Reena x
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Jane Dougherty
Apr 17, 2017 @ 16:31:30
Clever!
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Ritu
Apr 17, 2017 @ 17:27:15
Thanks Jane! Hope you’re well 😊
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Jane Dougherty
Apr 17, 2017 @ 19:46:41
Getting there, thanks 🙂
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Ritu
Apr 17, 2017 @ 19:50:46
😊
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Judy E Martin
Apr 17, 2017 @ 15:37:12
Two wonderful takes, Sis, love them! 🙂
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Ritu
Apr 17, 2017 @ 15:39:19
Thank you Sis xxx
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Erika Kind
Apr 17, 2017 @ 14:37:57
Great and profound takes, sis!
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Ritu
Apr 17, 2017 @ 15:27:50
Thanks sis xxx
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Erika Kind
Apr 17, 2017 @ 20:07:21
You are welcome, dear 😊💖
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