Colleen’s poetry challenge this week is using the words
Shadow & Light
Today I am incorporating a Tanka and a Haiku into a single poemy thing!
Never seeing light
Forever in the shadows
Feasting or darkness
Negativity can hurt
If you starve it of all light***
Keep your shadows small
Surrounding yourself with light
Make life positive
willowdot21
Aug 25, 2017 @ 12:44:38
Both Excellent Sis 🌹💜
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Ritu
Aug 25, 2017 @ 12:53:44
Thank you sis! 🌹💜
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willowdot21
Aug 25, 2017 @ 19:52:30
🌹💜
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robbiesinspiration
Aug 23, 2017 @ 21:00:09
A great poem, Ritu. Well done.
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Ritu
Aug 23, 2017 @ 21:10:02
Thanks Robbie!!!
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Erika Kind
Aug 23, 2017 @ 20:23:57
You know, I love your takes, Sis!!
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Ritu
Aug 23, 2017 @ 20:46:49
😙😙😙
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Marje @ Kyrosmagica
Aug 23, 2017 @ 08:42:46
Lovely mixture of haiku and Tanka Ritu. So agree with the last line. Positivity rocks!
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Ritu
Aug 23, 2017 @ 08:45:31
Thanks Marje! That’s what I think too!!!! 💜
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Judy E Martin
Aug 23, 2017 @ 05:38:01
I love these Sis, positivity is definitely the way! 🙂
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Ritu
Aug 23, 2017 @ 07:45:34
Thanks sis! 100% 💜
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willowdot21
Aug 23, 2017 @ 00:33:22
Beautiful Sis 💜💖
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Ritu
Aug 23, 2017 @ 07:44:43
Thank you Sis💜🌹
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Fourth Generation Farmgirl
Aug 23, 2017 @ 00:22:07
Perfect, Ritu! I enjoyed both of your lovely poems. 🙂
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Ritu
Aug 23, 2017 @ 07:44:27
Thank you Tonya 💜
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Hélène
Aug 22, 2017 @ 23:49:34
Both beautiful Ritu.
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Ritu
Aug 23, 2017 @ 07:44:15
Thank you Hélène 😍
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Colleen Chesebro
Aug 22, 2017 @ 21:38:52
Wow, Ritu. I love both your Tanka and Haiku. Well done. Good emotions expressed in your poetry. ❤
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Ritu
Aug 22, 2017 @ 21:39:11
Thank you so much Colleen xxx
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Annette Rochelle Aben
Aug 22, 2017 @ 21:34:05
Make life positive! What a great way to live.
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Ritu
Aug 22, 2017 @ 21:38:15
It is the best way, but not necessarily the easiest way, eh Annette! ❤
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pranabaxom
Aug 22, 2017 @ 21:30:56
Beautifully done.
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Ritu
Aug 22, 2017 @ 21:33:32
Thank you 🙂
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