#WRITESPIRATION #135 52 WEEKS IN 52 WORDS WEEK 40 – Keep Out! @sacha_black

Saha’s #Writespiration Prompt this week…

Your challenge is to write your story using the weekly theme/prompt and write it in just 52 words…. EXACTLY, no more, no less.

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Write about the day you ignored the ‘KEEP OUT’ sign.

The putrid smell emanating from beneath the door compelled me to push it open.
I stepped into a dark room, avoided mould filled vessels and mountains of fabric piled haphazardly to open the curtains…
I wish I hadn’t.
That’ll teach me to ignore signs on the door of my teenage son’s bedroom!

37 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Ritu
    Nov 07, 2017 @ 17:58:11

    Thank you 😊

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  2. Autism Youths
    Nov 07, 2017 @ 15:14:54

    Omg this is so well written. Followed 🙂 I also am a teen who aspires to spread awareness of neurological diseases through the love of FOOD in Singapore, Nigeria and other parts of the world. Do join me in my quest ahaha🙂 Do also follow my blog post and check out my posts at https://autismyouths.wordpress.com Here’s to a great friendship. Appreciate it ❤️

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  3. syl65
    Oct 05, 2017 @ 02:03:46

    LOL!!

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  4. Michael
    Oct 05, 2017 @ 00:47:22

    I like this one Ritu, it reminded me of once going thru my son’s school bag and discovering the lunches of some days past…

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  5. The Laughable Cheese
    Oct 04, 2017 @ 23:03:10

    https://wordpress.com/post/writeitonmywall.wordpress.com/1106 I saw yours and decided to do one too! 😀 I really like these challenges a lot. The results are always fun.

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  6. The Laughable Cheese
    Oct 04, 2017 @ 22:53:46

    very nice. the ending caught me by surprise

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  7. vanbytheriver
    Oct 04, 2017 @ 22:36:01

    Mine never used a sign, somehow, I just knew to stay away. I just read Judy’s, and mentioned that it was wise to keep the door closed. They do outgrow this stuff. Hang in there, Ritu. Nice take on the prompt.

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  8. Annette Rochelle Aben
    Oct 04, 2017 @ 21:30:51

    ewww

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  9. willowdot21
    Oct 04, 2017 @ 20:36:17

    Oh! I really love this Sis. 😱🌹💜💜💜💜

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  10. robbiesinspiration
    Oct 04, 2017 @ 19:43:33

    Ha ha, Ritu, indeed it will teach you.

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  11. The Satyr
    Oct 04, 2017 @ 19:43:18

    Hee Hee Hee! Brilliant! Great twist. Seriously, what is that funk!? X

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  12. Erika Kind
    Oct 04, 2017 @ 19:42:20

    OMG…. did you visit my house😲

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  13. Judy E Martin
    Oct 04, 2017 @ 19:15:00

    HAHA! I have just finished mine Sis and it seems we are on a similar wavelength this week -)

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