Charli’s prompt this week:
August 2, 2018, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story that includes a yellow tent. Where is it and who does it belong to? Think of how the color adds to the story. Go where the prompt leads.
Yellow Light District
A rustling noise caught my attention.
I trudged through the forest, kicking up the leaves, trying to trace the source of the sound.
A glow emanated from a clearing up ahead.
As I got closer I saw the glow came from the inside of a yellow tent.
It was a hastily erected contraption, and accompanying the rustles were giggles.
The light created shadows.
Two people.
There were definitely two.
The giggles became moans.
The shadows moved slowly, the moans became more intense.
I turned around, embarrassed to be there, until I heard “Oh Petey!”
That was my husband’s name…
https://carrotranch.com/2018/08/03/august-2-flash-fiction-challenge/
anuragbakhshi
Aug 07, 2018 @ 11:50:38
Oops!
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Ritu
Aug 07, 2018 @ 12:32:30
Indeed!
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Radhika Acharya
Aug 06, 2018 @ 01:47:55
Oopsie!!! 😑😀
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Ritu
Aug 06, 2018 @ 09:02:06
Oopsie indeed!
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Charli Mills
Aug 05, 2018 @ 20:01:50
Oh, Petey, oh no! Great transition of emotions — curiosity, embarrassment, fury!
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Ritu
Aug 05, 2018 @ 21:03:50
Glad you got the little story Charli!
Naughty Petey indeed!!!
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Erika Kind
Aug 05, 2018 @ 11:01:37
Oooops!! Now, who is the one who is supposed to be embarrassed….
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Ritu
Aug 05, 2018 @ 11:33:16
Will she tell him she knows???
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Erika Kind
Aug 05, 2018 @ 19:26:31
I hope there will be a sequel…
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Ritu
Aug 05, 2018 @ 21:01:06
Let’s see where the prompt leads us!
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Erika Kind
Aug 06, 2018 @ 20:04:12
Another series 😊
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Ritu
Aug 06, 2018 @ 20:13:10
Don’t tempt me!!!
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Erika Kind
Aug 06, 2018 @ 20:22:42
LOL… it did not mean it at all 😜
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Ritu
Aug 06, 2018 @ 20:26:29
😂
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Marje @ Kyrosmagica
Aug 04, 2018 @ 20:38:43
Oh beware a hubbies fondness for camping!
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Ritu
Aug 04, 2018 @ 20:48:15
Indeed 😃😲
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dornahainds
Aug 04, 2018 @ 17:47:50
Aye! Now that’s a dangerous surprise. 😎🥀
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Ritu
Aug 04, 2018 @ 19:23:43
Indeed!!!
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robbiesinspiration
Aug 04, 2018 @ 15:59:29
Oh dear, that sounds like bad news.
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Ritu
Aug 04, 2018 @ 16:00:31
Just a little!!!
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Jennie
Aug 04, 2018 @ 12:39:15
Well now… 😳
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Ritu
Aug 04, 2018 @ 12:44:33
I know! 😲
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Jennie
Aug 04, 2018 @ 12:54:26
😀
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willowdot21
Aug 04, 2018 @ 09:00:59
And the yellow turned to red and then black 💜💜
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Ritu
Aug 04, 2018 @ 09:02:58
Heated up and caused a wildfire no water could ever extinguish….. 😲
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willowdot21
Aug 04, 2018 @ 09:25:44
Omg!!!!
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Ritu
Aug 04, 2018 @ 09:26:26
😲😲😲
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the dark netizen
Aug 04, 2018 @ 06:04:20
Brilliant!! 😀
Ace twist in the end!
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Ritu
Aug 04, 2018 @ 08:15:52
Glad you liked it!😀
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Annette Rochelle Aben
Aug 04, 2018 @ 00:32:51
hey now…
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Ritu
Aug 04, 2018 @ 08:15:11
I know!!! 😲💜
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tidalscribe
Aug 03, 2018 @ 23:16:45
I loved the shock ending…
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Ritu
Aug 04, 2018 @ 08:14:59
Glad you liked! 💜
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manyofus1980
Aug 03, 2018 @ 22:18:48
ahem ahem! and what then? 😀 enquiring minds want more! xo
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Ritu
Aug 03, 2018 @ 22:19:23
Aha… What do you think may have happened???
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