Charli’s prompt this week:
August 9, 2018, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story that includes an act of “peering from the woods.” Go where the prompt leads.
I think this warrants a sequel to last week’s yellow tent-ry! Read here for the first part.
Caught In The Act
“Well Annie, that was fun! We should make these meetings of ours interesting more often.”
Petey unzipped the front flap of his yellow tent, allowing for a slice of light to cut through the darkness of the forest.
He stepped out and stretched, post-coitally, opening his eyes to the beauty of nature.
And stopped.
What was that?
Peering from the woods, he swore he saw the face of his wife, Susan, eyes open wide in horror.
A rustling sound followed.
“Come back Petey honey, we’ve still got time.” Annie’s voice brought him back.
Petey feared his time was up.
https://carrotranch.com/2018/08/09/august-9-flash-fiction-challenge/
But I Smile Anyway... 
Sep 26, 2018 @ 06:04:26
Love this one too ritu! ❤
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Sep 26, 2018 @ 06:53:32
😍
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Sep 02, 2018 @ 15:17:15
I’m so pleased to have found your website . I love reading flash fiction. And I have bought books in the past with flash fiction in. Your really good at it. I’m afraid I’m totally crap at it.
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Sep 02, 2018 @ 15:24:51
Thank you so much! I love to write and blogging introduced me to flash!!!
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Aug 14, 2018 @ 05:01:20
Oh, yeah, Petey, time’s up! This did segue well from last week. And I love the use of “post-coitally.”
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Aug 14, 2018 @ 09:07:29
I love that praise! And “coitus-interruptus”! Happened a lot when our kids were younger and kept waking up at inopportune moments 😝
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Aug 14, 2018 @ 21:55:16
After children, amazing they ever get siblings! 😀
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Aug 14, 2018 @ 22:18:19
I know 😂
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Aug 13, 2018 @ 01:21:44
Ooo… this was good, Ritu. I think you might need to continue this story.
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Aug 13, 2018 @ 07:29:18
Why thank you Jennie! Let’s see where the prompt leads…
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Aug 13, 2018 @ 10:51:40
Yes!! 😀
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Aug 11, 2018 @ 18:58:13
Good grief, Ritu! That’s dark… Beautifully written!
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Aug 11, 2018 @ 21:29:29
Ha! Glad you enjoyed!
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Aug 11, 2018 @ 06:06:53
Fun to read, Ritu! You are a master of words 🙂
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Aug 11, 2018 @ 08:12:24
Why thank you so much 💜🙏🏼
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Aug 10, 2018 @ 21:30:53
I think it was too Sis 💜💜
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Aug 10, 2018 @ 21:39:08
💜💜💜
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Aug 10, 2018 @ 18:49:35
Yay, here we go!!
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Aug 10, 2018 @ 19:15:07
You asked… you got ! 😉
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Aug 10, 2018 @ 19:54:55
Hehe… thank you, sis, I appreciate that 😊
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Aug 10, 2018 @ 20:00:04
😍😜
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Aug 10, 2018 @ 20:03:23
😅
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Aug 10, 2018 @ 17:28:13
Great combination!
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Aug 10, 2018 @ 17:36:54
Thanks Reena!!
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Aug 10, 2018 @ 17:01:49
Ah yes, we must beware of those girls named Annie… lol
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Aug 10, 2018 @ 17:07:54
Lol!!!! 😂😍
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Aug 10, 2018 @ 13:17:52
That’s a fun read. Well done. 🙂
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Aug 10, 2018 @ 13:19:54
Thanks Lynn 🙂
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Aug 10, 2018 @ 12:05:37
This is a great add on, Ritu. Well done.
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Aug 10, 2018 @ 12:07:05
Thanks Robbie, so many asked about what could happen next, and Charli’s prompt kinda lent itself to a sequel!
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