Linda’s #SoCS prompt for this week:
Your Friday prompt for Stream of Consciousness Saturday is “silent/silence.” Use one or both in your post. Have fun!
The Colour of Silence
Silence is golden
I often hear say
But I'd like to think different
That is, if I may
For silence can come
In a total array
Of colours, depending on
What you're feeling that day
That deafening silence
Can feel rather black
When you're thinking that
No one's quite got your back
The silence of loss
Comes across as quite blue
When you're filling a void
Not knowing what to do
When silent anger is simmering
Deep inside your head
No, that's not golden,
You're just seeing red
That silence you hear
When it's late at night
Kids asleep, no disturbances
That's purely white
In the peace of the moment,
When all is quite calm
That silence is purple
It does you no harm
And yes, it can feel, sometimes
Silver or golden
As you accept life
When your body does olden
A rainbow of quiet
See, what I said was true
Feel silence in so many ways
Not only just a few
Cos silence it comes in
In many a hue
We all like some quiet
Which colour's for you?
Shiva Malekopmath
Jun 06, 2019 @ 15:21:12
Awesome!
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Ritu
Jun 06, 2019 @ 15:50:33
Thank you 😊
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Laura
Jun 02, 2019 @ 03:52:55
What beautiful imagery this is.
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Ritu
Jun 02, 2019 @ 08:46:47
Thank you Laura 😍
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Michael Ogazie
Jun 02, 2019 @ 02:41:37
Beautiful poem…Madam, you have been nominated in one of my recent blog post for an sward. CONGRATULATIONS!
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Ritu
Jun 02, 2019 @ 08:45:34
Thank you Michael 💜
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thereluctantpoet
Jun 02, 2019 @ 01:38:46
Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Erika Kind
Jun 01, 2019 @ 21:24:27
That’s true, sis. Silence has many faces. It can be insightful and liberating or depressing and scary.
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Ritu
Jun 01, 2019 @ 22:16:54
Exactly sis xxx
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Erika Kind
Jun 02, 2019 @ 11:45:17
💖
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charlypriest
Jun 01, 2019 @ 19:29:52
Nice read, I’m up for the challenge tomorrow Saturday.
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Ritu
Jun 01, 2019 @ 19:30:23
Thanks!
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charlypriest
Jun 01, 2019 @ 19:30:55
I meant Sunday sorry….
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OIKOS™-Publishing
Jun 01, 2019 @ 19:21:45
Great, how you get the differences of silence meeting colours. The last part remembers me on a school rhyme too. 🙂 May the goldene silence be with you, this weekend Sis! 🙂 Michael
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Ritu
Jun 01, 2019 @ 19:25:37
Thanks Bro!
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OIKOS™-Publishing
Jun 01, 2019 @ 20:28:45
:-)) Dont forget to feed Sonu too. Lol
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Jennie
Jun 01, 2019 @ 15:21:54
Beautiful, Ritu! I love how you pulled in all the colors.
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Ritu
Jun 01, 2019 @ 15:24:46
Thanks Jennie. Tried my best xx
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Jennie
Jun 01, 2019 @ 16:33:31
And you did it so well! ❤️
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Writing to Freedom
Jun 01, 2019 @ 14:59:18
Lovely poem and feeling tone Ritu.
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Ritu
Jun 01, 2019 @ 15:04:32
Thank you ❤️
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Rae Reads
Jun 01, 2019 @ 14:41:21
Cleverly done!
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Ritu
Jun 01, 2019 @ 14:41:39
Thanks Rae 😊
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Maggie
Jun 01, 2019 @ 13:17:04
Beautifully done.
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Ritu
Jun 01, 2019 @ 14:33:33
Thank you Maggie ❤️
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Dan Antion
Jun 01, 2019 @ 11:50:03
What an interesting approach to the prompt, Ritu. I love the way you used colors in this poem. Very well done.
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Ritu
Jun 01, 2019 @ 14:31:49
Thanks Dan… The golden in Silence is Golden, is what made me think if it really is…
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Lakshmi Bhat
Jun 01, 2019 @ 10:59:59
Beautiful and so well expressed.
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Ritu
Jun 01, 2019 @ 14:30:57
Thank you ❤️
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The Febrile Imaginings Of A Cluttered Mind
Jun 01, 2019 @ 10:46:07
Did you sing ‘Silence is golden’? I know I did. Many fine words, spaces and grammar – always a treat to read. G:)
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Ritu
Jun 01, 2019 @ 14:30:47
I did indeed!!!
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robertawrites235681907
Jun 01, 2019 @ 09:41:32
A delightful poem, Ritu.
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Ritu
Jun 01, 2019 @ 09:46:08
Thanks Robbie 🤗
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willowdot21
Jun 01, 2019 @ 09:01:49
Oh! Sis this is so very clever, I love the idea of a silence rainbow. Very profound. 💜💜💜
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Ritu
Jun 01, 2019 @ 09:11:05
Thanks sis… it was jsut what came out last night as I wrote it! ❤
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willowdot21
Jun 01, 2019 @ 09:30:32
Lol that’s SoCs for you.. it is brilliant 💜
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faithfullyyours2017
Jun 01, 2019 @ 07:43:39
lovely poem ritu….u really write well…keep going….
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Ritu
Jun 01, 2019 @ 08:58:55
Thank you ❤
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