Sue’s photo prompt this week.
Excuse me while I go all Fifty Shades on you!
Dom/Sub
Caught
Unable to turn an inch
Imprisoned
Every move, I feel a pinch
Confined
A punishment so sweet
Penned
Spreading body heat
Enveloped
Anticipating touch
Jailed
Can sense you, oh so much
Enclosed
A feeling so intense
Caged
A desire so immenseRitu 2016
Maybe this is because I am reading Grey at the moment by E.L. James.
Don’t shoot me!
I read the first three Fifty Shades books when they came out, I had to see what the hype was about with this one too!
palpablepennings
Aug 18, 2016 @ 19:58:40
Enjoyed reading this..a different form for me! 🙂
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Ritu
Aug 18, 2016 @ 21:08:27
Thank you ! I’m not so naughty minded most of the time but this just suited it!!!
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KL Caley
Aug 18, 2016 @ 13:04:36
Hehe – great one Ritu! Need a heat added button – lol. KL ❤
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Ritu
Aug 18, 2016 @ 13:06:56
Lol!! Thanks!!!
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Graeme Cumming
Aug 16, 2016 @ 09:20:08
Probably better if I keep my thoughts to myself on this one…
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Ritu
Aug 16, 2016 @ 09:22:52
Uh oh lol! Feel free G!
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Graeme Cumming
Aug 16, 2016 @ 09:49:09
Just seeing you in a new light, Ritu… A very good light, of course
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Ritu
Aug 16, 2016 @ 11:03:08
Ha!!! 😉
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macjam47
Aug 16, 2016 @ 01:36:40
Love your take on the photo. I’ve not read Shades, but I’ve heard enough from those that have, to know the whole story. LOL Ya gotta love those spoilers.
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Ritu
Aug 16, 2016 @ 08:59:37
Lol!!! I jumped on that bandwagon hen it came out, and though it was not well written, there is a compulsion to read the rest of the books!!!
And I watched the film!!!
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stevetanham
Aug 15, 2016 @ 17:58:55
Gosh!
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Ritu
Aug 15, 2016 @ 18:23:22
🤐😶😁
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cestlavieladypatience
Aug 13, 2016 @ 06:44:18
How do I use the picture in my post?
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Ritu
Aug 13, 2016 @ 07:38:05
Go to the original post link, Sue’s post, then, if you can right click on the photo and copy or save it. Then you can use it!
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cestlavieladypatience
Aug 13, 2016 @ 07:39:19
Thanks for replying, I figured it out and I finished the post. Oh and congrats on your health journey. Keep up the fine work. I know it can be challenging some days.
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Ritu
Aug 13, 2016 @ 07:40:33
Thank you 😊 Challenging is one way to describe it lol!
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cestlavieladypatience
Aug 13, 2016 @ 07:40:53
🙂 I just completed a workout an hour ago.
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Ritu
Aug 13, 2016 @ 07:42:04
I’m decorating these next few days….that’s my exercise for now!!!
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cestlavieladypatience
Aug 13, 2016 @ 07:42:28
As long as you’re moving, it’s all good and it counts.
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Ritu
Aug 13, 2016 @ 07:54:38
True! 😊😊😊
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dornahainds
Aug 12, 2016 @ 16:03:21
I’m certain the numerous fans of Fifty Shade would agree, that this is a very ingenious write, writing. 😉
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Ritu
Aug 12, 2016 @ 17:36:07
Thanks!!!
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Tikeetha T
Aug 12, 2016 @ 14:31:45
LOL. Nice post. Is the book Grey good?
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Ritu
Aug 12, 2016 @ 17:35:29
Thanks! It’s quite similar to the original books….
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wafflemethis
Aug 12, 2016 @ 14:02:09
Fifty shades of Ritu, has a slight ring to it, is there something you’re not telling us sis😅😅😅
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Ritu
Aug 12, 2016 @ 17:35:03
Hee lol! Shhhh!
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willowdot21
Aug 12, 2016 @ 09:28:32
Omg Ritu,just seen that I wrote ‘ live your take on the prompt’ I honestly meant to say ‘ love your take on the prompt ‘ ! Well take it any way you like !!! xxx😧
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Ritu
Aug 12, 2016 @ 10:10:02
Hee hee! Whatever floats your boat Willow…!! 😉
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willowdot21
Aug 12, 2016 @ 10:29:35
😋😎
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Judy Martin
Aug 12, 2016 @ 07:26:09
That was brilliant Sis and i agree with sue that your poem is definitely better than 50 Shades!! I read all the books despite thinking they were really badly written!!! 🙂
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Ritu
Aug 12, 2016 @ 09:01:47
Thanks sis!
Yeah, they weren’t really literary gold, were they!!! I read them all to, and currently reading Grey…. From his perspective. Still not greatly written!!!
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Judy Martin
Aug 12, 2016 @ 18:01:16
I can’t remember if I have read that one or not!
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Ritu
Aug 12, 2016 @ 18:59:53
It just came out last year xx
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Judy Martin
Aug 12, 2016 @ 19:01:27
Maybe not then! don’t know if I can bear it!!!! 🙂
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Ritu
Aug 12, 2016 @ 19:14:43
Let me bear it on your behalf !!
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Judy Martin
Aug 12, 2016 @ 19:16:57
Please do and give me the run down!!
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Ritu
Aug 12, 2016 @ 19:17:16
Will do!!! 😊
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Erika Kind
Aug 12, 2016 @ 07:24:08
Wow, I had not thought you would go this way when I saw the picture. But I like your way a lot more than the creepy feeling I got when looking at that photo… lol!
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Ritu
Aug 12, 2016 @ 09:00:21
It was all because of what I’m reading at the moment sis, lol!!!
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Erika Kind
Aug 12, 2016 @ 13:41:11
Sis, sis…… 😄
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Ritu
Aug 12, 2016 @ 17:34:34
😶😶😶😶
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Erika Kind
Aug 12, 2016 @ 17:35:25
😂😂😂
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Sue Vincent
Aug 12, 2016 @ 06:34:26
Never read them…but from the bits I have seen, I prefer your poem, Ritu 🙂
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Ritu
Aug 12, 2016 @ 08:58:41
Ha! Thank you!
When they came out, it was the talk of the playground (the mums obviously!!!) at drop off and pick up time! So I thought I’d try them out.
The first was intriguing as I’d never read BDSM literature, but the writing was not all that. Repetitive. But I felt compelled to know what happened in the sequels!
This one that came out was written from his perspective, rather than hers, so I thought I’d try it and see… Same kind of writing… You’re not missing much!!!!!
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Sue Vincent
Aug 12, 2016 @ 15:58:10
I saw a few extracts when they first came out. The writing still didn’t appeal at all and, from what I hear, it plays to the stereotypes too.
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Ritu
Aug 12, 2016 @ 17:35:53
Very much… I must be a glutton for punishment!!!
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Sue Vincent
Aug 12, 2016 @ 17:59:49
That’s the trouble when a story grabs you 😉
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Ritu
Aug 12, 2016 @ 18:59:26
😉😉😉
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Michael
Aug 12, 2016 @ 02:29:01
I like where you have taken this Ritu, excellent .
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Ritu
Aug 12, 2016 @ 08:54:56
Thanks Michael…. Not a sign of my preferences, honest!!! 😃
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sonofabeach96
Aug 12, 2016 @ 01:24:54
That pic is creepy as hell! 😃
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Ritu
Aug 12, 2016 @ 08:54:24
It is rather thought provoking!
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sonofabeach96
Aug 12, 2016 @ 13:05:44
Where was it taken?
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Ritu
Aug 12, 2016 @ 13:15:35
That would be a question better suited to Sue the prompter for this challenge! I just did the writing!!!!
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sonofabeach96
Aug 12, 2016 @ 13:38:17
Oh, sorry, thought it was your pic. 😃
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Ritu
Aug 12, 2016 @ 17:33:01
Lol!!
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willowdot21
Aug 11, 2016 @ 23:37:19
And the answer was? …🤗 Live your take on the prompt! 😎
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Ritu
Aug 11, 2016 @ 23:50:07
Lol! Thanks Willow!!!! Still reading the book… not sure dom/sub is the thing for me but hey, I hope I got a taster of it in the poem!!!
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willowdot21
Aug 12, 2016 @ 06:58:00
You did, you did! 😗 xxx
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Ritu
Aug 12, 2016 @ 08:59:22
Ha lol! Thanks! 😃
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vanbytheriver
Aug 11, 2016 @ 23:17:41
Going grey…it used to be about the hair ??? ☺☺☺ Good one, Ritu. 💜
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Ritu
Aug 11, 2016 @ 23:18:30
Lol.. I’m doing that too…but very disgracefully!!! Thank you Van!!!
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