Ronovan Writes Weekly Haiku Challenge #58 Rise & Save

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Its that time of week again, for the haiku challenge set by the lovely Ron. Click here to see the challenge.
The prompt words are Rise & Save
Two entries from me this time!

Help…
I watch the water
Slowly rising up ahead
…who will save me now?

Bake Off Heats Heat
Checking my souffle
Rising high in the oven
…Enough to save me?

But I Smile Anyway...

25 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Marje @ Kyrosmagica's avatar Marje @ Kyrosmagica
    Aug 28, 2015 @ 13:24:30

    A souffle haiku how imaginative!

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  2. Vashti Q's avatar Vashti Quiroz-Vega
    Aug 25, 2015 @ 22:54:22

    Hello Ritu! Both your haiku are good. Unique use of the prompt words. 🙂

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  4. the secret keeper's avatar the secret keeper
    Aug 18, 2015 @ 15:54:19

    First one scared for the impending danger. Second Haiku makes me want to cheer you on. I hope your souffle doesn’t fall. Very clever. And very hot topic your first Haiku. Well, expressed. jk 🙂

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  5. Prakash Hegade's avatar Prakash Hegade
    Aug 17, 2015 @ 21:23:51

    Both of them have turned up good. I like second one more.. 🙂

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  6. niasunset's avatar niasunset
    Aug 17, 2015 @ 17:34:05

    Wonderful dear Ritu, you are amazing. Thank you, love, nia

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  7. Judy E Martin's avatar edwinasepisodes
    Aug 17, 2015 @ 17:31:42

    Ass usual Ritu you have come up with a couple of rackers! 🙂

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  8. Chris White's avatar Chris White
    Aug 17, 2015 @ 17:16:48

    Very good shuffle! 🎺 You are a poet, Ritu.

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  9. Erika's avatar Erika Kind
    Aug 17, 2015 @ 17:06:03

    They are both excellent, Ritu! 🙂

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