Monday evening means it’s Ron’s haiku challenge! Read more here.
Great words this week – Child & Star. I started with a little humour, but the words touched me in a personal way, paving the path for the second haiku…
Reality
Reality stars
Nothing more than hyped up and
Celebrated brats
Ritu 2016
And one a little more emotionally deep… means something to me…
Forever Stars
Farewell my cherubs
Gone too soon but with me still
Two more stars twinkle
Ritu 2016
Greg
Feb 26, 2016 @ 01:39:38
The second one is very touching and, obviously, my favorite of the two. (I can’t stand the “reality stars”, no matter how old 😉 )
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Ritu
Feb 26, 2016 @ 07:42:58
Thank you Greg 😊
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Jane Dougherty
Feb 07, 2016 @ 22:33:55
Beautiful and sad.
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Ritu
Feb 07, 2016 @ 22:59:43
Thank you Jane 😊
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Sarina
Feb 07, 2016 @ 08:25:16
(hugs) for the second one. Beautiful Haiku.
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Ritu
Feb 07, 2016 @ 09:35:23
Thank you Sarina 😊
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Vashti Quiroz-Vega
Feb 05, 2016 @ 21:17:19
Great haiku! I completely agree with ‘Reality’. I hate that show and others like it. What’s the point? The 2nd haiku is very heartfelt and touching. ❤
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Ritu
Feb 05, 2016 @ 21:26:54
Thank you Vashti 😊
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ellenbest24
Feb 05, 2016 @ 11:40:21
I would wear three like buds on a tree
But their love shines through
The happier I am the happier they’ll be
My tiny pieces of unborn me.
😇 Thank you. You woke my heart.
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Ritu
Feb 05, 2016 @ 12:57:58
That’s lovely 😊 thank you 😊
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ellenbest24
Feb 05, 2016 @ 13:53:55
You’re welcome. 😇
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neelwritesblog
Feb 04, 2016 @ 18:40:21
I liked both your haikus good effort way to go
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Ritu
Feb 04, 2016 @ 18:58:22
Thank you Neel! !
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georgeforfun Life's too short to be miserable or serious anymore!
Feb 03, 2016 @ 20:09:10
Reblogged this on georgeforfun.
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Ritu
Feb 05, 2016 @ 23:31:31
:~)
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georgeforfun Life's too short to be miserable or serious anymore!
Feb 09, 2016 @ 20:41:16
wishing you a happy and wonderful week
👀 ♥ * ͜ * ♥ 👀
( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
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Ritu
Feb 09, 2016 @ 20:55:35
Thank you George! You too 😀😊😊
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georgeforfun Life's too short to be miserable or serious anymore!
Feb 09, 2016 @ 23:04:31
I am going to make the best of it, indeed, dear Ritu. ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
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Ritu
Feb 09, 2016 @ 23:42:04
Best thing to do!!
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georgeforfun Life's too short to be miserable or serious anymore!
Feb 09, 2016 @ 23:44:34
yes, indeed. fighting old age doesn’t work, you just have to live and make the best of it. and have as much fun as possible. 👀 ♥ * ͜ * ♥ 👀
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Ritu
Feb 10, 2016 @ 07:49:56
I totally agree!
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georgeforfun Life's too short to be miserable or serious anymore!
Feb 10, 2016 @ 21:07:33
💞
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Judy Martin
Feb 02, 2016 @ 21:37:36
Oh Ritu, that second haiku was so touching. Beautiful.
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Ritu
Feb 02, 2016 @ 21:39:52
Thank you sis 💖
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Kat Myrman
Feb 02, 2016 @ 18:43:32
Haha! I love your haiku! It made me laugh! 🙂
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Ritu
Feb 02, 2016 @ 18:46:12
Thanks Kat ☺ I’m guessing that was the first one that made you giggle 😊
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Kat Myrman
Feb 02, 2016 @ 18:50:44
Oh my yes…I didn’t realize there was a second. I had to go back to read the rest of your post. Such a lovely tribute to your “angels”. Peace to you.
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Ritu
Feb 02, 2016 @ 18:51:28
Thank you Kat ☺ I thought you may have missed it 😊
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Kat Myrman
Feb 02, 2016 @ 18:53:47
I have a cherub who shines in the heavens myself. One never forgets. 🙂
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Ritu
Feb 02, 2016 @ 19:04:51
No, never 😇
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Suzanne
Feb 02, 2016 @ 12:05:35
The second one touched my heart – truly beautiful.
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Ritu
Feb 02, 2016 @ 13:20:41
Thank you Suzanne 😊
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syl65
Feb 02, 2016 @ 06:05:41
Hilarious and then very touching sis.. twinkling extremely bright up there!
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Ritu
Feb 02, 2016 @ 08:01:24
Thanks bro! That kinda sums me up… 😄😄😄
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syl65
Feb 02, 2016 @ 15:44:25
You’re welcome! It’s you all the way 😀😀😀
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Ritu
Feb 02, 2016 @ 17:32:13
😀😀😀
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Fourth Generation Farmgirl
Feb 02, 2016 @ 03:42:10
Lovely, Ritu. 💛
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Ritu
Feb 02, 2016 @ 07:56:37
Thank you Tonya 💖
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Fourth Generation Farmgirl
Feb 02, 2016 @ 14:07:53
😊
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Olga
Feb 02, 2016 @ 01:49:14
I was touched by your photo and emotional tribute to your “cherubs.”
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Ritu
Feb 02, 2016 @ 07:54:14
Thank you Olga 😊
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wafflemethis
Feb 02, 2016 @ 00:25:29
Beautiful and touching sis❤
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Ritu
Feb 02, 2016 @ 07:52:31
Thank you bro 😊
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Donna
Feb 01, 2016 @ 23:48:58
Beautiful tributes I have quite a few of those stars twinkling brightly
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Ritu
Feb 01, 2016 @ 23:52:41
Thank you…
🌠🌠🌠🌠✨✨✨✨
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Natalia Erehnah
Feb 01, 2016 @ 23:23:39
The tribute is beautiful!
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Ritu
Feb 01, 2016 @ 23:25:00
Thank you Natalia 💖
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Erika Kind
Feb 01, 2016 @ 23:05:05
Having a sh… internet at the moment! The pics are not loading. Anyway, I hope at least the comment gets through! Beautiful and touching take… I can imagine the last one!
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Ritu
Feb 01, 2016 @ 23:07:12
The internet can suck at some times eh sis!
Thank you sis… I wasn’t going to go down that route initially, but that is where my inspiration took me… down memory lane…
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Erika Kind
Feb 01, 2016 @ 23:13:20
I am sorry to hear that…. I tought it could be the reason…. big hugs, my dear little sis 💖💖💖
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Ritu
Feb 01, 2016 @ 23:14:23
Some things aren’t meant to be. Some bodies aren’t meant to grace this earth.but it never stops you remembering them…
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Erika Kind
Feb 01, 2016 @ 23:18:19
Yes, I can imagine that well. But on the other hand, why should we forget? They were/have been loved and have their place in a different way in life!
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Ritu
Feb 01, 2016 @ 23:22:03
Exactly sis. I’ll never think of them in sorrow… But celebrate what could have been 😊
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Erika Kind
Feb 02, 2016 @ 10:25:16
That is very, very beautiful, sis 💖 💖
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Ritu
Feb 02, 2016 @ 13:19:59
💖💖💖💟💟💟
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Erika Kind
Feb 02, 2016 @ 13:28:56
💖😘💖
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