Monday Haiku time! And Ron has given us a tough couple of words this week!
Rein & Quest
Two takes this week…
The Hunter
Now the hunt is on
Excitement can’t be suppressed
It’s within my graspRitu 2016
Sleeping Beauty – A Tanka
Holding the reins tight
I gallop into the woods
On a quest for love
To find the Princess I seek
Asleep for a hundred years.Ritu 2016
Images from Pixabay
May 27, 2016 @ 01:50:14
I like both but the second one really resonates with my princess heart lol 😊
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May 27, 2016 @ 04:26:36
Lol thanks!
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May 26, 2016 @ 05:10:20
Nicely done. I like how you used synonyms in the haiku and the tanka was really good.
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May 26, 2016 @ 06:39:28
Thank you! They were great words but pretty tough to actually use, I found! 😊
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May 26, 2016 @ 14:11:12
I had an initial thought, but felt it was a bit to obvious. You did a much better job than I
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May 26, 2016 @ 14:45:50
I’m sure yours were equally great!!
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May 24, 2016 @ 17:58:36
These are geat Sis, but the second is my favourite, going on a quest to find the princess 🙂
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May 24, 2016 @ 18:05:39
Thanks sis ! You’re right though… these were tough words! !
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May 24, 2016 @ 18:06:33
I struggled a lot with them! 🙂
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May 24, 2016 @ 18:07:24
Idefinitely used the thesaurus links to see how I could use the words!
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May 24, 2016 @ 18:08:18
I think it was a good idea as it worked! 🙂
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May 24, 2016 @ 18:44:35
😀😀
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May 24, 2016 @ 14:05:08
Brilliantly executed. I like both but number two is my best 🙂
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May 24, 2016 @ 17:44:38
Thank you Jacqueline!
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May 24, 2016 @ 08:38:06
Gorgeous, Ritu 😀
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May 24, 2016 @ 08:44:10
Thank you!
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May 24, 2016 @ 08:45:50
You’re always welcome, dear friend ❤
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May 24, 2016 @ 07:47:23
Two wonderful takes and so different again. Very good! Love both and oh, what a picture of that leopard!
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May 24, 2016 @ 07:50:45
Thank you sis! Tough words this week!!!
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May 24, 2016 @ 14:17:59
But when I look at your takes it looks like a piece of cake. Well done, Sis! 😊
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May 24, 2016 @ 17:45:52
Thanks sis! !!
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May 24, 2016 @ 18:01:45
💖💖💖
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May 24, 2016 @ 06:57:50
Excellent.
The quest for good (wedding) food did not rein in your enthusiasm for haikus and tankas😊😊
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May 24, 2016 @ 07:26:10
Hank you! My mind seems to be trained to continue the creative flow, even whilst celebrating!!!
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May 24, 2016 @ 03:28:26
Definitely, two beauties, Sister!
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May 24, 2016 @ 06:53:10
Thank you Brother!
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May 24, 2016 @ 13:25:17
You’re welcome Sister!! Good afternoon!
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May 24, 2016 @ 17:44:26
😊
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May 24, 2016 @ 20:37:27
😊
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May 24, 2016 @ 02:25:20
Lovely 🙂
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May 24, 2016 @ 06:52:41
Thank you 😊
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May 24, 2016 @ 02:14:33
I like your Sleeping Beauty Tanka best, of course, but they are both beautiful. 🙂
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May 24, 2016 @ 06:52:32
Thank you so much Brenda, and thanks for the Follow 😊
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May 24, 2016 @ 00:59:02
Wonderful pieces of writing.
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May 24, 2016 @ 06:52:06
Thank you Miriam!
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May 23, 2016 @ 23:16:36
Great haiku, Ritu 🙂
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May 23, 2016 @ 23:18:15
Thank you Al!!! 😀😀😀
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May 23, 2016 @ 23:03:29
beautiful pieces, love them.
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May 23, 2016 @ 23:13:23
Thank you ! 😊
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