Diana has a great picture for this month’s prompt! I have already seen some pretty fab entries!
Mechanical Tart
On the outside
Perfect
An Adonis you cannot
Reject
But look beneath the
Exterior
You might find something
Inferior
Instead of heart and
Soul
You’ll find no more than a
Hole
A man with no
Emotions
Made by machine and
Potions
Listen close and you will
Hear
The whirring of the cogs and
Gear
That operate within his
Skin
To love this man would be a
Sin
Be careful to whom you give your
Heart
Make sure it’s not this mechanical
Tart
Ritu 2019
Smorgasbord - Variety is the Spice of Life.
May 13, 2019 @ 17:25:43
Brilliant Ritu..hugsx
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Ritu
May 13, 2019 @ 20:13:10
Thank you Sally ❤️
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mylilplace
May 11, 2019 @ 16:01:27
A different take on the picture and a potentially wise advice. 🙂
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Ritu
May 11, 2019 @ 16:05:21
Thank you xx
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Jennie
May 11, 2019 @ 11:23:33
Well said! You took a great direction on this prompt, Ritu.
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Ritu
May 11, 2019 @ 12:05:30
It’s what poured out, Jennie!
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Jennie
May 11, 2019 @ 17:27:22
😍
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jenanita01
May 11, 2019 @ 09:52:08
Reblogged this on anita dawes and jaye marie.
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jenanita01
May 11, 2019 @ 09:51:51
Unusual layout and very amusing, Ritu. Made interesting reading, that’s for sure…
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Ritu
May 11, 2019 @ 10:02:38
Thank you for enjoying and sharing it 😍
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Writing to Freedom
May 10, 2019 @ 23:11:12
Fun and creative.
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Ritu
May 10, 2019 @ 23:12:47
Thank you!
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Writing to Freedom
May 11, 2019 @ 01:30:13
You’re welcome.
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Author G M Cleary
May 10, 2019 @ 22:01:08
Fantastic! …and I love the format.
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Ritu
May 10, 2019 @ 22:02:08
Thank you ❤️
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D. Wallace Peach
May 10, 2019 @ 20:57:07
Reblogged this on Myths of the Mirror and commented:
Wise advice from Ritu. 🙂 I hope you enjoy her poem!
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akobifolajuwon
May 09, 2019 @ 21:43:52
Ouite imaginative.
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Ritu
May 09, 2019 @ 21:50:23
Thanks 😊
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Deepa
May 09, 2019 @ 03:42:20
That was a nice one Ritu.
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Ritu
May 09, 2019 @ 06:59:26
Thank you Deepa ❤️
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OIKOS™-Publishing
May 08, 2019 @ 19:43:17
Funny, but true advice! Fantastic, Sis! 🙂 Best wishes, Michael
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Ritu
May 08, 2019 @ 20:14:26
Thanks Bro 💜
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robbiesinspiration
May 08, 2019 @ 18:51:12
This is brilliant, Ritu.
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Ritu
May 08, 2019 @ 18:57:34
Thank you Robbie 💜
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Ethan Dale Eagar
May 08, 2019 @ 05:05:43
Witty and fun! Great job! I enjoyed reading 🙂
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Ritu
May 08, 2019 @ 06:55:35
Thank you Ethan😊
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tidalscribe
May 08, 2019 @ 01:04:53
I love the rhythm and the lay out of the poem.
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Ritu
May 08, 2019 @ 06:58:33
Thank you!
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H.R.R. Gorman
May 07, 2019 @ 23:14:27
Very nice! Don’t marry a tin man, that’s for sure!
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Ritu
May 08, 2019 @ 06:58:49
Nope, definitely don’t!!!
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D. Wallace Peach
May 07, 2019 @ 23:03:51
Ah yes. Look below the skin – very good advice in this case. Well done, Ritu. That was a fun one, and the title cracked me up. Thanks so much for taking up the prompt. I’m looking forward to sharing. 😀
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Ritu
May 08, 2019 @ 07:00:00
I really wasn’t sure where to go, then this happened!!! Glad you enjoyed it! 😍
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D. Wallace Peach
May 08, 2019 @ 13:24:33
I did. I love the variety of imaginations and the stories they produce. 🙂
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Ritu
May 08, 2019 @ 16:55:11
It’s great reading all the takes!
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Annette Rochelle Aben
May 07, 2019 @ 21:35:43
mechanical tart… love this
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Ritu
May 07, 2019 @ 21:37:51
Something silly that came into my head sis!
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Hélène - Willow Poetry
May 07, 2019 @ 21:30:27
Oh, I love this poem, Ritu. Very clever.
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Ritu
May 07, 2019 @ 21:37:33
Thank you Helene!
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Hélène - Willow Poetry
May 07, 2019 @ 21:41:44
My pleasure.
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Erika Kind
May 07, 2019 @ 21:28:05
Good advice, sis!
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Ritu
May 07, 2019 @ 21:36:37
Thanks sis!
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Erika Kind
May 07, 2019 @ 21:58:26
😊
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