Time to haiku it up again! Check it out here! I am trying a tanka haiku today.
I’m Free
I think I’m free of
All those chains that bound me so
Liberated now
As I walk I feel so light
The world seems a different place.
Ritu 2015
21 Jul 2015 24 Comments
in Challenges, Poems Tags: Blog, Blog Post, Blogger, Blogging, free & think, ronovan's weekly haiku chalkenge, tanka
Time to haiku it up again! Check it out here! I am trying a tanka haiku today.
I’m Free
I think I’m free of
All those chains that bound me so
Liberated now
As I walk I feel so light
The world seems a different place.
Ritu 2015
Vashti Quiroz-Vega
Jul 29, 2015 @ 22:15:49
Hi Ritu! Your poem gives the feeling of freedom. I felt my mind relax as I read it. Beautiful and peaceful. ❤
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Ritu
Jul 29, 2015 @ 22:17:31
Thank you Vashti!
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the secret keeper
Jul 26, 2015 @ 06:54:53
Lovely! Loved the flow & meaning of your words. jk 🙂
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Ritu
Jul 26, 2015 @ 07:37:16
Thank you so much!
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Prakash Hegade
Jul 21, 2015 @ 19:09:03
That was a lovely tanka! 🙂
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Ritu
Jul 21, 2015 @ 20:32:48
Thank you! My first of me! 😊
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edwinasepisodes
Jul 21, 2015 @ 17:04:28
That was a wonderful Haiku. Well done Ritu! 🙂
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Ritu
Jul 21, 2015 @ 20:26:34
Thank you Judy! I tried a tanka today!
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edwinasepisodes
Jul 21, 2015 @ 20:35:00
You did that so well, I can’t quite get my head around that yet 🙂
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Ritu
Jul 21, 2015 @ 20:37:00
I read Ron’s article and thought I’d have a go!
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edwinasepisodes
Jul 21, 2015 @ 20:47:58
Well you cracked it at the first attempt! 🙂
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Ritu
Jul 21, 2015 @ 23:00:29
Thank you! I shall try it again then!
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Erika Kind
Jul 21, 2015 @ 10:00:57
That was great, so great!!! You told my book in 5 lines!
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Ritu
Jul 21, 2015 @ 20:19:12
Thanks lol!
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Erika Kind
Jul 21, 2015 @ 20:21:02
😘
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Kreng Jai
Jul 21, 2015 @ 08:59:08
Rest it as were you plz typo, my iPad is a crazy gal. 😆
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Ritu
Jul 21, 2015 @ 20:16:53
Oh I do that all the time Rekha!!!
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Kreng Jai
Jul 21, 2015 @ 08:58:19
A good one. But we’re you really bound?😀
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Ritu
Jul 21, 2015 @ 20:16:30
Lol!
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wafflemethis
Jul 21, 2015 @ 07:15:09
You did good☺
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Ritu
Jul 21, 2015 @ 07:26:47
😊
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wafflemethis
Jul 21, 2015 @ 07:09:38
I thought that was gonna be a tidbit when it appeared. But wow what a totally amazing Haiku it was beautiful. You blew it away with that one☺
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Ritu
Jul 21, 2015 @ 07:10:54
Thank you… It sprang to mind after my letting go post!
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