Ronovan’s Weekly Haiku Challenge – #74 – Cake & Wolf

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Monday night means sitting at the kids drum lesson, and thinking up Haiku for the lovely Ronovan, and his weekly haiku challenge. Check it out here.

The prompt works this week are Wolf & Cake… Hmmm interesting… Could be very obvious… Or not!

Ok so obvious…
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Dessert
Wolfing down dinner
With my eyes on the dessert
Rich chocolate cake!

And the deeper…
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Victim – a tanka
Fangs encrusted with
Blood from his many victims
He turns and glances
Fixing me with his cold eyes…
His wolfish stare pins me down.

But I Smile Anyway...

33 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Marje @ Kyrosmagica
    Dec 14, 2015 @ 19:17:37

    Very good Ritu, and a tanka too. That cake looks seriously chocolatey…..

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  3. jazzytower
    Dec 12, 2015 @ 19:18:49

    Lovely, and a pretty cake it is too:)

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  4. wafflemethis
    Dec 10, 2015 @ 05:33:49

    Both amazing sis, love the cake☺

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  5. syl65
    Dec 08, 2015 @ 05:13:10

    Both are great! I just hope you had a slice of cake before the wolf came along…

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  6. Marquessa
    Dec 08, 2015 @ 04:57:30

    Whoa! Excellent job!

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  7. blackcherriess
    Dec 08, 2015 @ 03:37:09

    both are amazing! love them ❀

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  8. Fourth Generation Farmgirl
    Dec 08, 2015 @ 00:21:56

    Fantastic, Ritu! Loved them both! πŸ™‚

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  9. Wild Daffodil
    Dec 07, 2015 @ 23:50:27

    Shivers! – i went back to the cake for comfort!

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  10. Olga
    Dec 07, 2015 @ 22:02:59

    The “Victim” was riveting. The beginning of a suspenseful tale in poetic form. Perfect image.

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  11. Erika Kind
    Dec 07, 2015 @ 21:17:08

    Ohhhhh, wow!!! When I saw the cake I thought….. OMG…. craving!!!! But then I read your second Haiku and I forgot the cake…. fantastic, Sis!

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  12. edwinasepisodes
    Dec 07, 2015 @ 20:49:14

    You did a great job there Sis. I loved the cake haiku, but the tanka was brilliant!

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