Ronovan’s Weekly Haiku Challenge #75 – Charm & Look

 

haiku-challenge-image.pngMonday is Ronovan’s Weekly Haiku Challenge, and last night I was so busy wrapping gifts for kids teachers and writing Christmas cards, I was unable to post my entry.  So here it is, on a Tuesday morning instead!

Oh he has raised the bar again this week, has Ron! Yes, you can do your usual haiku using the prompt words, Look & Charm, but the added challenge is to have the haiku with opposing sentences. So the first be a positive and a second a negative… or something like that!

And another extra, try and write a Freku… this consists of free verse, and a traditional haiku that ties the whole feel of the verse in 3 lines.

PHEW!

Check his challenge out here.

Ok, So I have had a go. Let’s see whether I actually got this right, or whether I should stick to what I know!

CAD

Gent Cad

Image from Google

Unaware, I fell for you
And all that you did say
How did you beguile me so
And trick me in such a way?

I thought we were together
Like one, forever more
I gave my love, my heart to you
Then you walked right out the door

Broken now, I stand here
Feeling used and so unpure
I gave my innocence to you
All that talk was just a lure

———

Looking like a gent
You blinded me with your charms
Like a proper cad

Ritu 2015

I hope this worked! Please, let me know what you think!

22 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. R. Todd
    Dec 18, 2015 @ 16:08:48

    That haiku sums it up perfectly, however, that being said, I did like the flow of the top half.

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  2. wafflemethis
    Dec 15, 2015 @ 18:43:56

    Brilliant Sis, the queen of haiku😘

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  3. Fourth Generation Farmgirl
    Dec 15, 2015 @ 17:18:29

    These are both terrific, Ritu! 🙂

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  4. Jane Dougherty
    Dec 15, 2015 @ 14:20:57

    Nice twist in the tail 🙂

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  5. vanbytheriver
    Dec 15, 2015 @ 14:05:00

    Nicely done, Ritu. ❤️

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  6. jazzytower
    Dec 15, 2015 @ 13:23:30

    Happens to the best of us. A good write.

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  7. Erika Kind
    Dec 15, 2015 @ 10:41:34

    I have no idea what Haikus and Frekus are about. I just can say I love that poem! Wow!!! Been there… fantastically written, Sis!

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  8. edwinasepisodes
    Dec 15, 2015 @ 09:53:38

    Well done Ritu I loved the poem and the haiku. You did a fine job! 🙂

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