You know I like a prompt now and again, and in December Kruti had set some prompts for fiction, which I enjoyed writing, and she said she would be back with something different. That prompt came in the form of writing a Concrete Poem.
Todays prompt is gonna be a bit tedious :p – Can we all try writing a concrete poem? Yes of course we can.
Concrete, pattern, or shape poetry is an arrangement of linguistic elements in which the typographical effect is more important in conveying meaning than verbal significance. It is sometimes referred to as visual poetry, a term that has now developed a distinct meaning of its own.
Check her prompt post out here.
So, anyway, concrete poetry, or shape poetry… I hadn’t heard of it before, until, ironically, last weekend, when my daughter came home, and her homework was to write a shape poem. What on earth was a shape poem? Rhyming couplets about a square? Haiku about triangles? Sonnets about circles?
No, silly! It is a poem, or some writing, written in the shape of an object! She had do do one with the prompt word of Earthquakes, so she wrote a senses-inspired poem about the look, feel, taste, smell and sound of an earthquake, and each line looked like a crack!
And now it’s my turn!
Now not all of us are a creative genius on a computer, to write in various directions, so Kruti said we could write, the traditional way, on paper, and photograph the finished item…
So this is what I did!
It’s an ode to underpants! I hope you all like it, and actually, more than that, I hope you can actually see it!
Ode To Underpants!
I’m not sure if it even counts! But hey, I had fun doing it!
Gradmama2011
Jan 27, 2016 @ 02:15:46
http://mumbletymuse.com/2016/01/26/orange-cat-in-a-box/ Here it is finally! I hope.
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Ritu
Jan 27, 2016 @ 07:45:11
Good job!
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Gradmama2011
Jan 27, 2016 @ 15:00:07
thank you 🙂
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Judy Martin
Jan 17, 2016 @ 16:10:08
Ha ha! How very clever Ritu. I love this shape poetry. 🙂
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Ritu
Jan 17, 2016 @ 16:27:04
Thanks Judy! You must try it!!
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Judy Martin
Jan 17, 2016 @ 16:43:09
Not sure about that one I cannot draw!
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Ritu
Jan 17, 2016 @ 18:52:36
Aw but your wordscan make an illusion of a shape!!
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Judy Martin
Jan 17, 2016 @ 19:03:19
I might have a go, but it will probably get messy! 🙂
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Ritu
Jan 17, 2016 @ 20:47:50
We like messy sis!
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lifeconfusions
Jan 17, 2016 @ 05:59:26
Haha, this is adorable !!! Perfect for the prompt, so fun and light hearted. well done Ritu 🙂
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Ritu
Jan 17, 2016 @ 09:09:55
Thank you! I didn’t want to go complex!!! But I had fun with it!
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wafflemethis
Jan 17, 2016 @ 02:30:19
I did it sis☺☺
https://wafflemethis.wordpress.com/2016/01/17/krutis-poem-prompt/
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Ritu
Jan 17, 2016 @ 09:08:40
I saw! It was great bro!
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Kruti Mehta
Jan 17, 2016 @ 01:35:58
hahaha…i laughed out loud looking at the picture and totally loved it. Wow, you totally rocked the prompt!! loved your topic 😉 and trust me the feeling is mutual in selection of underpants 😉 . Thanks for participation 🙂
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Ritu
Jan 17, 2016 @ 09:07:37
Thanks Kruti! I thought for so long about what to do, and the pants thing just flagged itself up!
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vanbytheriver
Jan 17, 2016 @ 00:49:25
Very cute, and most appropriate…that it is laundry-focused ! ☺
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Ritu
Jan 17, 2016 @ 01:07:32
I know lol! Thanks!!!
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wafflemethis
Jan 17, 2016 @ 00:48:22
Sis. I love it. So funny what a great idea with the washing line☺
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Ritu
Jan 17, 2016 @ 01:07:16
Thanks bro! Glad you enjoyed it!
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wafflemethis
Jan 17, 2016 @ 01:07:44
I’m gonna have a go sis☺
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Ritu
Jan 17, 2016 @ 01:08:18
Go for it bro!! You’ll do great!
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wafflemethis
Jan 17, 2016 @ 01:08:54
Cheers Sis I’ll try my best😉
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Ritu
Jan 17, 2016 @ 09:05:48
You did great bro!
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New Journey
Jan 17, 2016 @ 00:32:42
very creative…I am still thinking of how to do it…LOL I am not a writer….!!!
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Ritu
Jan 17, 2016 @ 00:38:22
Thank you! Once you get an idea, the creativity will flow! I’m sure you’ll be great!
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New Journey
Jan 17, 2016 @ 00:40:07
thanks I thought about doing Christmas ornaments….maybe because its the season….I will give it a try…thanks for the great idea…kat
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Ritu
Jan 17, 2016 @ 01:06:26
You’ll do great!
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New Journey
Jan 17, 2016 @ 01:07:22
thanks
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Erika Kind
Jan 17, 2016 @ 00:09:17
Ritu that is just awesome! What an amazing idea! That is typically you!!! Inspired by hotpoint in some way? Mine is coming up tomorrow. Already scheduled. Fantastically done, most of all because it is your first one!
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Ritu
Jan 17, 2016 @ 00:37:34
Lol! Actually I hadn’t thought if that, but the whole laundry thing must be in my subconscious!!! Look forward to yours!
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Erika Kind
Jan 17, 2016 @ 00:57:29
I am sure meanwhile you even dream about it!
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Ritu
Jan 17, 2016 @ 01:07:45
I must!!!
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Erika Kind
Jan 17, 2016 @ 01:19:05
Oh my, I so wish for you that it all works out quicker than expected now.
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Ritu
Jan 17, 2016 @ 09:06:26
I hope your wish comes true! From your lips to Hotpoint’s ears!!
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Erika Kind
Jan 17, 2016 @ 11:35:38
Yep…. I keep it up!!!
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Ritu
Jan 17, 2016 @ 12:36:21
😘
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Erika Kind
Jan 17, 2016 @ 12:47:09
😊💖
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oosorio456
Jan 16, 2016 @ 23:41:24
I love your poetry
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Ritu
Jan 16, 2016 @ 23:43:14
Thank you!
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