
Oh, I had fun today! Lovely Ron gave our challenge prompt here.
The prompt words Shower and Play… What great words! Of course, there were so many ways we could go!
So I think I went all ways possible!
Haiku in 3/5/3 and 5/7/5 format, a tanka, and a Freku, just for Ron!

Duck – 3/5/3
Why shower?
Playing in the bath
Is more fun!
Ritu 2016

Sweat – 5/7/5
Feeling so sweaty
After a taxing workout
Need a shower methinks!
Ritu 2016

Innocence – Tanka
Watching children play
Laughing, gigging and happy
Is the greatest sight
Shower them with your love, not
Material Posessions
Ritu 2016

Heated Rainfall – Freku
Drops fall
Getting heavier
Heads turne upwards
Welcoming the rain
Washing away
The emptiness
Eyes lock
Raindrops caress
The face
Fingers trace
Their path
Chilled drps
Touching
Heated flesh
Body,
Outwardly cleansed
Thoughts,
Filthy…
***
Eyes meet, bodies touch
While cavorting in the rain
Temperatures rise
Ritu 2016
Phew! That was fun!











Mar 22, 2016 @ 19:49:38
Well you have nailed it from every angle sis! Well done (pssst, my favourite is the last one)!!! 🙂
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Mar 22, 2016 @ 19:56:14
Thank you sis! Once I got going I loved the prompt words!!!! 😊
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Mar 22, 2016 @ 21:16:58
They were great, weren’t they? 🙂
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Mar 22, 2016 @ 21:24:58
A true humdinger of a pair! !!
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Mar 22, 2016 @ 18:30:56
Wow! What a fantastic collection of work. You were inspired! I enjoyed them all but my favourite is Innocence. Marie
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Mar 22, 2016 @ 18:52:27
Thank you Marie! I was inspired indeed!! 😊😊😊
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Mar 22, 2016 @ 17:55:17
Wow! All great poems! I loved ‘Innocence’ the message behind that one is so true and important. That last poem was on FIRE! Loved it! 😀
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Mar 22, 2016 @ 18:04:53
Thank you Vashti! I loved this prompt!!! ☺☺☺
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Mar 22, 2016 @ 23:58:04
It shows! 😉
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Mar 22, 2016 @ 15:16:57
Wow, Ritu, you were clearly inspired by these prompts! You’ve covered everything in here! 🙂
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Mar 22, 2016 @ 16:55:24
I loved this prompt!
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Mar 22, 2016 @ 17:07:02
It seemed perfect for you!
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Mar 22, 2016 @ 17:07:57
What.. ? Naughty but nice 😊😊😊
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Mar 22, 2016 @ 17:29:23
Both naughty AND nice, I think! 😀
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Mar 22, 2016 @ 18:03:08
Thanks!!
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Mar 22, 2016 @ 10:12:56
Fantastic, Ritu! 🙂
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Mar 22, 2016 @ 12:14:32
Thank you Tonya! 🙂
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Mar 22, 2016 @ 08:36:44
I just pondered…… pondered…….😌 ….. why the last one has turned out as the longest one….. ok, even my previous sentence went in that direction… lol…. 😂 … I beter stop here! 😂
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Mar 22, 2016 @ 08:37:59
Lol!!!! Well it is tidbit Tuesday lol!! 😀 morning sis!!
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Mar 22, 2016 @ 09:09:15
Yes!!!!! And you took full advantage of it, Sis! Good morning, angel of Kent! 😘
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Mar 22, 2016 @ 09:13:53
😚😚😚
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Mar 22, 2016 @ 09:14:29
💖💖💖 (only 3 days to go!!!)
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Mar 22, 2016 @ 09:15:22
Whoop whoop! We are being observed today eek!!
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Mar 22, 2016 @ 09:45:53
Oh… but you are such a sweet teacher. Just start singing and they are hypnotized 💖
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Mar 22, 2016 @ 10:05:42
Lol! If only it was that simple!!
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Mar 22, 2016 @ 11:08:56
Hmm….. you need to check it out. At least you would surprise them… haha!
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Mar 22, 2016 @ 12:15:37
Luckily I am on good terms with my ‘observer’!!!
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Mar 22, 2016 @ 16:25:50
Actually I don’t believe you need tricks, sis! You are a wonderful teacher for sure!
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Mar 22, 2016 @ 16:56:20
Thanks sis! Just need to wait for feedback now!
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Mar 22, 2016 @ 17:56:06
Exciting!!!
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Mar 22, 2016 @ 18:05:03
😁😁😁
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Mar 22, 2016 @ 05:17:16
Enjoyed your quartet of inspiration sister! 🙂
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Mar 22, 2016 @ 07:49:35
Thanks Brother! Something hit the mark last night!
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Mar 22, 2016 @ 16:01:25
You’re welcome Sister! You were definitely on a roll!
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Mar 22, 2016 @ 16:55:53
😊😊😊
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Mar 22, 2016 @ 16:58:34
Wonderful afternoon/evening sister!
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Mar 22, 2016 @ 17:06:37
It is indeed brother!! 😊😊😊
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Mar 22, 2016 @ 17:08:13
Happy to hear that 😀😀😀
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Mar 22, 2016 @ 17:12:41
We were observed today… feedback pending… but the sun is out its all ok!!!
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Mar 22, 2016 @ 17:22:17
It will be all good sister! Even the sun knows it!!
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Mar 22, 2016 @ 18:02:41
I hope so brother!
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Mar 22, 2016 @ 20:50:22
I believe so sister!
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Mar 22, 2016 @ 21:24:27
🌞🌞🌞
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Mar 22, 2016 @ 21:39:41
😊😊😊
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Mar 22, 2016 @ 04:20:07
Every, which, way, beautiful!! 💚❤️💛💜💙🙋🏼
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Mar 22, 2016 @ 07:49:10
Thank you Roz! 😊
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Mar 22, 2016 @ 03:17:57
Yes you were inspired! 🙂
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Mar 22, 2016 @ 07:48:53
😊
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Mar 22, 2016 @ 01:20:45
Phew!!! Is right!!! Great selection Ritu!
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Mar 22, 2016 @ 07:48:40
Thanks Kat!
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Mar 21, 2016 @ 23:41:55
A nice variety here:)
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Mar 22, 2016 @ 00:01:22
Thank you! ~I was inspired tonight!
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