RonovanWrites #Weekly #Haiku #Poetry Prompt #Challenge #89 Shower&Play

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Oh, I had fun today! Lovely Ron gave our challenge prompt here.

The prompt words Shower and Play… What great words! Of course, there were so many ways we could go!

So I think I went all ways possible!

Haiku in 3/5/3 and 5/7/5 format, a tanka, and a Freku, just for Ron!

duck

Duck – 3/5/3
Why shower?
Playing in the bath
Is more fun!
Ritu 2016

sweaty

Sweat – 5/7/5
Feeling so sweaty
After a taxing workout
Need a shower methinks!
Ritu 2016

happy children

Innocence – Tanka
Watching children play
Laughing, gigging and happy
Is the greatest sight
Shower them with your love, not
Material Posessions
Ritu 2016

rainn

Heated Rainfall – Freku
Drops fall
Getting heavier
Heads turne upwards
Welcoming the rain
Washing away
The emptiness
Eyes lock
Raindrops caress
The face
Fingers trace
Their path
Chilled drps
Touching
Heated flesh
Body,
Outwardly cleansed
Thoughts,
Filthy…
***
Eyes meet, bodies touch
While cavorting in the rain
Temperatures rise
Ritu 2016

Phew! That was fun!

52 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Judy E Martin's avatar Judy Martin
    Mar 22, 2016 @ 19:49:38

    Well you have nailed it from every angle sis! Well done (pssst, my favourite is the last one)!!! 🙂

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  2. Marie's avatar syllabubsea
    Mar 22, 2016 @ 18:30:56

    Wow! What a fantastic collection of work. You were inspired! I enjoyed them all but my favourite is Innocence. Marie

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  3. Vashti Q's avatar Vashti Quiroz-Vega
    Mar 22, 2016 @ 17:55:17

    Wow! All great poems! I loved ‘Innocence’ the message behind that one is so true and important. That last poem was on FIRE! Loved it! 😀

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  4. Al Lane's avatar Al Lane
    Mar 22, 2016 @ 15:16:57

    Wow, Ritu, you were clearly inspired by these prompts! You’ve covered everything in here! 🙂

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  5. Fourth Generation Farmgirl's avatar Fourth Generation Farmgirl
    Mar 22, 2016 @ 10:12:56

    Fantastic, Ritu! 🙂

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  6. Erika's avatar Erika Kind
    Mar 22, 2016 @ 08:36:44

    I just pondered…… pondered…….😌 ….. why the last one has turned out as the longest one….. ok, even my previous sentence went in that direction… lol…. 😂 … I beter stop here! 😂

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  7. syl65's avatar syl65
    Mar 22, 2016 @ 05:17:16

    Enjoyed your quartet of inspiration sister! 🙂

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  8. Roslyn Hill's avatar Roz Hill
    Mar 22, 2016 @ 04:20:07

    Every, which, way, beautiful!! 💚❤️💛💜💙🙋🏼

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  9. Janice's avatar Janice
    Mar 22, 2016 @ 03:17:57

    Yes you were inspired! 🙂

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  10. Kat Myrman's avatar Kat Myrman
    Mar 22, 2016 @ 01:20:45

    Phew!!! Is right!!! Great selection Ritu!

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  11. jazzytower's avatar jazzytower
    Mar 21, 2016 @ 23:41:55

    A nice variety here:)

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