#WritePhoto – Carved

Sue’s #WritePhoto Prompt this week:

Our future is carved
By the steps of our past
Each breath that we take
One closer to our last
Think deep about
All the things that you do
For the marks that you leave
Will reflect upon you
What gift will you give?
What joy will you spread?
What path will you leave
For the future to tread?

Ritu 2018

#writephoto

https://scvincent.com/2018/03/22/thursday-photo-prompt-carved-writephoto/

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  2. willowdot21
    Mar 25, 2018 @ 20:25:05

    Oh! Sis, I do like this πŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œ

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  4. Jennie
    Mar 23, 2018 @ 13:08:35

    This was so good, Ritu. I love the message.

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  5. Judy E Martin
    Mar 23, 2018 @ 11:02:01

    I absolutely love this, Sis. It really is so thought-provoking. πŸ™‚

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  6. boundlessblessingsblog
    Mar 23, 2018 @ 06:12:08

    Awesome poem, Ritu.

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  7. anuragbakhshi
    Mar 23, 2018 @ 04:45:52

    A beautiful message indeed.

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  8. crazywriterof6
    Mar 23, 2018 @ 04:00:10

    I like it! Past and present collide…

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  9. robbiesinspiration
    Mar 23, 2018 @ 03:58:47

    A wonderful message, Ritu. I am keeping this one.

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  10. Kalpanaa
    Mar 23, 2018 @ 03:57:03

    Good poem – if a little dark – each breath that we take one closer to our last? But I agree with the thought.

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  11. Michael
    Mar 23, 2018 @ 03:43:21

    Lovely Ritu, a future we should all be concerned about.

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  12. Dorinda Duclos
    Mar 23, 2018 @ 03:34:20

    Wonderful, Ritu!!

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  13. motherofangels3
    Mar 23, 2018 @ 02:49:42

    Beautiful in depth and truth!

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  14. ketakimalwade
    Mar 23, 2018 @ 02:41:49

    Short and sweet…Beautiful

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  15. syl65
    Mar 23, 2018 @ 02:00:12

    Hopefully a smooth path. Very inspiring Sister!!

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  16. OIKOSβ„’-Redaktion
    Mar 23, 2018 @ 01:11:23

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  17. Annette Rochelle Aben
    Mar 22, 2018 @ 22:55:28

    Deep and profound

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  18. willowdot21
    Mar 22, 2018 @ 22:17:49

    Love this so much πŸ’œ Sis very atmospheric πŸ’œ

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  19. pranabaxom
    Mar 22, 2018 @ 22:09:20

    Lovely.

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  20. Sue Vincent
    Mar 22, 2018 @ 21:58:33

    Lovely, Ritu, and reflects my own thoughts on how we view both the past and posterity.

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  21. Erika Kind
    Mar 22, 2018 @ 21:49:49

    What we sow we will reap! The more aware we are of it the more we sow only seeds of fruits we wish to have in our life!

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