Writespiration #91 – The Hug

Hugs – The prompt Sacha has given us for her Writespiration challenge this week.

I love a good hug! I think they can solve so many ills!

I wrote a little poem this time…

A cuddle, a hug, a squeeze

There’s nothing more likely to please.

It’s just like a smile, it costs nothing to you

But a well-timed hug , there’s a lot it can do

The shoulder squeeze,  a solidarity stance

A hug with a shrug, well they do it in France!

The cuddles with children they warm the heart

Snuggles with your Dearest, never to part

But I have to say, the best hug I’ve had

Is the deep embrace I get from my Dad.

 

 

22 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Trackback: Writespiration #92 First and Last lines | Sacha Black
  2. Sacha Black
    Jul 08, 2016 @ 15:32:25

    awwwwwww this was so lovely, and I loved the last two lines.

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  3. jademwong
    Jul 05, 2016 @ 20:01:55

    This was wonderful! The lyrical feel of the words, the lines just jumped and danced in such a whimsical way. And a hug from a father is definitely one of the best hugs of all 🙂

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  4. Al Lane
    Jun 30, 2016 @ 08:40:47

    Aw, that’s lovely x

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  5. Judy Martin
    Jun 30, 2016 @ 08:09:00

    Lovely poem sis, and spot on too! 🙂

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  6. Erika Kind
    Jun 30, 2016 @ 06:57:51

    Oh, is that lovely, Sis 💖

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  7. Marje @ Kyrosmagica
    Jun 30, 2016 @ 06:33:44

    Lovely hug poem Ritu. It truly captures a hug so well!

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  8. shandraeats
    Jun 29, 2016 @ 23:46:10

    Beautiful!!

    Liked by 1 person

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  9. kphoenix1
    Jun 29, 2016 @ 22:34:03

    It’s heart warming. I love it!

    Liked by 1 person

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  10. Shadeau
    Jun 29, 2016 @ 22:16:52

    This warms my heart 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

    Reply

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