RonovanWrites #Weekly #Haiku #Poetry Prompt #Challenge #121 Creep&Race

Lovely Ron’s haiku prompt this week.


Creep & Race

Two from me this week!


Race of a lifetime
Creeping to the finish line
My time is up now

Ritu 2016


My heartbeat races
Thoughts of you creep in my mind
Hunger awakens

Ritu 2016

Images from Pixabay

27 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Vashti Quiroz-Vega
    Nov 04, 2016 @ 20:34:06

    Hi Ritu! Both haiku are beautiful and meaningful––well done. ❤

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  2. paintdigi
    Nov 01, 2016 @ 22:38:41

    able you give me your opinion on my 40th painting table? I’m interested in him

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  3. dornahainds
    Nov 01, 2016 @ 17:08:20

    Love the range of emotions and scenes of the two separate poems.


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  4. Judy E Martin
    Nov 01, 2016 @ 12:26:20

    I love the different takes on these Sis. The first one, very poignant and the second passionate! 🙂

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  5. Erika Kind
    Nov 01, 2016 @ 11:17:17

    Two great takes! The first one is fitting the holiday we celebrate today!

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  6. willowdot21
    Nov 01, 2016 @ 08:34:41

    Both of these are beautiful, the first full of the end and the second so full of beginning.

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  7. Rajiv
    Nov 01, 2016 @ 07:25:59


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  8. pranabaxom
    Nov 01, 2016 @ 05:54:15

    Specially during Diwali time, thoughts of rasagolla and gulab jamun must be creeping into your mind giving hunger pain.

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  9. anisioluiz2008
    Oct 31, 2016 @ 23:55:03

    Reblogged this on O LADO ESCURO DA LUA.

    Liked by 1 person


  10. Mother Willow
    Oct 31, 2016 @ 23:44:34

    two lovely haiku.

    Liked by 1 person


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