RonovanWrites #Weekly #Haiku #Poetry Prompt #Challenge #129 Feel&Space

Lovely Ron’s prompt this week…

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Feel & Space

Christmas excesses
Leave me feeling very full
With no space for more!

Ritu 2016

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Empty spaces left
Where Christmas gifts were hidden
Feeling contentment

Ritu 2016

21 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Vashti Quiroz-Vega
    Dec 30, 2016 @ 19:59:23

    Both haiku describe my situation perfectly. 😉 Well done.

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  2. willowdot21
    Dec 29, 2016 @ 23:12:46

    Both Beautiful!! ❤

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  3. Gayl
    Dec 29, 2016 @ 18:36:54

    Great haiku! I love how you captured the feelings of Christmas. 🙂

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  4. Judy E Martin
    Dec 29, 2016 @ 17:05:37

    Oh, well done Sis. What a perfect take this week 🙂

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  5. dornahainds
    Dec 28, 2016 @ 18:49:42

    Fabulous!

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  6. robbiesinspiration
    Dec 28, 2016 @ 12:42:33

    These are lovely, Ritu. I tweeted this on @bakeandwrite.

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  7. Erika Kind
    Dec 28, 2016 @ 10:59:29

    Two lovely takes, Sis! I laughed when reading the first one. Can relate to that so well… haha!

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  8. Rajiv
    Dec 28, 2016 @ 04:59:53

    Donovan….
    Donovan…,
    You are a stubborn young lass!

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  9. pranabaxom
    Dec 27, 2016 @ 23:26:00

    Aw! I still have left over desserts from Christmas eve dinner. If you have no space to fill, then it will be wasted.
    Ah! I see. It is feel, not fill. I take it back.

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