TJ’s Household Challenge – Flower and Simply

 

TJ’s prompt this week:

Flower & Simply

Focus your brain
Welcoming an idea
To simply flower

Ritu 2017

Or…

Focus your brain
Allowing an idea
To simply flower

Ritu 2017#

Two variations that Graeme suggested I showcase together, showing two focuses or focii!

Which one do you prefer?

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35 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. manyofus1980
    Nov 19, 2017 @ 23:29:05

    very nicely done! where do you find all of the challenges, i mean, how? xxx

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  2. Judy E Martin
    Oct 09, 2017 @ 19:49:46

    I like them both but the second one reads better ,Sis 🙂

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  3. OIKOS™-Redaktion
    Oct 09, 2017 @ 16:47:52

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  4. willowdot21
    Oct 08, 2017 @ 23:12:37

    Love these Sis xx

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  5. dornahainds
    Oct 08, 2017 @ 19:35:03

    The second reads more fluidly than the first, I think. 😎😎😎🥀🥀🥀

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  6. teandpaper
    Oct 08, 2017 @ 17:46:50

    I like the ‘allowing’ one, giving permission to the idea take over!

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  7. Annette Rochelle Aben
    Oct 08, 2017 @ 16:08:29

    This is cool. I have yet to get into this challenge. I like what you did.

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  8. Erika Kind
    Oct 08, 2017 @ 14:33:53

    Two great takes. Changing one word and it gets a different (deep) meaning!

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  9. Fourth Generation Farmgirl
    Oct 08, 2017 @ 14:00:57

    Both haikus are lovely, especially the second one. Love your creativity, Ritu!

    Enjoy your Sunday.

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  11. Book Club Mom
    Oct 08, 2017 @ 12:36:20

    Both are so nice – but I like the first one a little better. Keep them coming!

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  12. robbiesinspiration
    Oct 08, 2017 @ 12:30:17

    Very nice, Ritu. I like the second one best.

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  13. anisioluiz2008
    Oct 08, 2017 @ 11:40:04

    Reblogged this on O LADO ESCURO DA LUA.

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  14. aka Cibo the Anti-Pasti Poet
    Oct 08, 2017 @ 11:26:35

    And sometimes punctuation ‘focuses’ the reader upon what the writer means.

    Having the poem read out loud is not always possible.

    But, for multiple interpretations, a lack of punctuation is often of interest.

    Hope I make some sense here – and am not just confusing things.

    G:)

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  15. aka Cibo the Anti-Pasti Poet
    Oct 08, 2017 @ 11:17:41

    Can I suggest ‘allowing’ as an alternative to ‘welcoming’ – then you have 2 Haiku with slightly differing focuses (or is it ‘focii’?)

    G:)

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