Charli’s Carrot Ranch 99-word Fiction prompt:
May 16, 2019, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story that goes in search of trees. It can be one particular tree, a grove, woods, or forest. What makes the tree worth seeking? Go where the prompt leads!
Tree of Memories
I need to find it.
I know it’s here somewhere.
We used to visit here regularly when we were courting.
Where is that tree?
I think it was an Oak.
Huge sprawling branches that created a vast canopy, under which we used to sit, backs resting against the thick, sturdy trunk.
It was here we had our first kiss.
Here, we professed our love.
Here, you proposed.
Is it this one? My fingers trail over the rough bark. A spark of memory.
Yes, here.
Here, my love, I’ll lay you to rest, scattered amongst the memories of our love.
Charli Mills
May 22, 2019 @ 23:09:23
A tree that witnessed life, love, and passing. Sometimes we need such a witness. Beautiful flash, Ritu!
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Ritu
May 23, 2019 @ 06:54:56
Thank you Charli ❤️
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Jennie
May 19, 2019 @ 13:19:11
Oh my goodness! How beautiful, Ritu! ❤️
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Ritu
May 19, 2019 @ 13:40:37
Thank you Jennie xxx
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Jennie
May 19, 2019 @ 13:52:06
You’re welcome, Ritu!
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Norah
May 19, 2019 @ 08:06:40
Ah, that last line brings out all the meaning that is needed – so bittersweet.
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Ritu
May 19, 2019 @ 08:35:29
Thank you Norah 💜
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H.R.R. Gorman
May 19, 2019 @ 01:04:06
A memorable response.
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Ritu
May 19, 2019 @ 07:58:49
Thank you ❤️
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robbiesinspiration
May 18, 2019 @ 16:32:19
I can relate to this post, Ritu. It is nice to find things from the past that hold good memories for us.
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Ritu
May 18, 2019 @ 16:48:30
100% Robbie 💜
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D. Avery @shiftnshake
May 18, 2019 @ 16:03:02
What a fine place to end up. Well done, the twist was perfect.
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Ritu
May 18, 2019 @ 16:19:42
Thank you so much 💜
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joylennick
May 18, 2019 @ 11:23:36
Poignant and so touching xx .
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Ritu
May 18, 2019 @ 11:26:14
Thank you Joy xx
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Image Earth Travel
May 18, 2019 @ 07:17:26
Great twist!
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Ritu
May 18, 2019 @ 08:26:46
Thank you ❤️
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syl65
May 18, 2019 @ 04:19:06
Beautiful, poignant and touching ending Sister ❤
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Ritu
May 18, 2019 @ 08:26:29
Thanks Brother 💜
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syl65
May 18, 2019 @ 15:01:13
You’re welcome Sister 💜
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Annette Rochelle Aben
May 17, 2019 @ 23:09:42
Oh, so romantic
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Ritu
May 17, 2019 @ 23:11:04
💜💜💜 Thanks sis 💜 🙏🏼 💜
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willowdot21
May 17, 2019 @ 22:40:19
Beautiful Sis.💜
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Ritu
May 17, 2019 @ 23:06:45
Thank you sis ❤
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willowdot21
May 17, 2019 @ 23:42:07
🙋🙋
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