RonovanWrites Weekly Haiku Challenge #41 Want/Tatters

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It’s that time of the week again folks! The words to include are want and tatters. Check out the challenge here!

Here goes!


Why did I want you?

You took my heart, ripped it out…

Left it in tatters


Little Beggar Girl

“I want to eat, Sir”

Clothes hang off her in tatters

Her dirty face pleas

11 Comments (+add yours?)

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  2. Evolving ruminations
    Apr 26, 2015 @ 12:34:15

    Loved both of them!!

    Liked by 1 person


  3. Vashti Quiroz-Vega
    Apr 24, 2015 @ 15:57:34

    Loved both of these. The first is full of passion and the second is heart-wrenching. The second was my favorite. It will haunt me.

    Liked by 1 person


  4. edwinasepisodes
    Apr 21, 2015 @ 16:52:49

    Wonderful again Ritu. You are fantastic at these! 🙂

    Liked by 1 person


  5. Cats at the and Back Home in
    Apr 20, 2015 @ 19:52:59

    Good. A bit on the sad side though.

    Liked by 1 person


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