RonovanWrites Weekly Haiku Challenge #41 Want/Tatters

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It’s that time of the week again folks! The words to include are want and tatters. Check out the challenge here!

Here goes!

Heartbreak

Why did I want you?

You took my heart, ripped it out…

Left it in tatters

And

Little Beggar Girl

“I want to eat, Sir”

Clothes hang off her in tatters

Her dirty face pleas

11 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Trackback: RonovanWrites Weekly #Haiku #Poetry Prompt Challenge 41 Review | ronovanwrites
  2. Evolving ruminations
    Apr 26, 2015 @ 12:34:15

    Loved both of them!!

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  3. Vashti Quiroz-Vega
    Apr 24, 2015 @ 15:57:34

    Loved both of these. The first is full of passion and the second is heart-wrenching. The second was my favorite. It will haunt me.

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  4. edwinasepisodes
    Apr 21, 2015 @ 16:52:49

    Wonderful again Ritu. You are fantastic at these! 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

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  5. Cats at the Bar.org and Back Home in Bromont.com
    Apr 20, 2015 @ 19:52:59

    Good. A bit on the sad side though.

    Liked by 1 person

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