Matt is a naughty boy! He knows how I love to use words to add into my story when he gives us his Flash Fiction Foray inspiration… But he has chosen an instrumental this week! Check it out Here – Appassionata Secret Garden
She slowly opened the rusty lock, on the old wooden door. It creaked, as she pushed the door open. Taking a deep breath, she stepped forward and raised her eyes. There it was. Looking as amazing as it had all those years ago. Sure, the flower beds were overgrown with weeds, the path no longer clear to walk along, but she could see it. The bench stood there, surrounded by beautiful wild rose bushes. She slowly took frail steps to the bench, felt the wind-worn wood and sank down. “My secret garden,” she whispered, then closed her eyes… forever….
Not sure… What do you think…?
But I Smile Anyway... 
Aug 03, 2015 @ 20:31:04
Oh that is so lovely. The end is perfect for the piece. I especially liked “wind-worn wood.” Great job!
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Aug 03, 2015 @ 20:58:24
Thank you! 😊
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Jul 30, 2015 @ 21:49:58
Love it! I want to know why, how and what next. Perhaps you’d best make it into a novel. X
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Jul 30, 2015 @ 22:31:03
You know, there were so many ideas I had… I might make it into a short story!
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Jul 29, 2015 @ 20:37:14
Oh Ritu, this is just beautiful how you put this song into words. What a perfect combination, one caresses the other. Lovely!!!!
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Jul 29, 2015 @ 21:29:55
Thank you Sis! It was a work in progress, I listened to the music this morning, then the words came, in the afternoon!
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Jul 29, 2015 @ 21:45:52
You are able to get in alignment with what you do and that is why you are in this flowing where words simply appear in the perfect way.
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Jul 29, 2015 @ 21:47:14
What a compliment, sis! Thank you! I hope these holidays mean that I can write much more, and really explore my words!
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Jul 29, 2015 @ 21:50:52
I know, writing under timely pressure is not fun. But even then you are amazing!
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Jul 29, 2015 @ 21:54:19
You are biased! I’ve said that before sis! 😘😘
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Jul 29, 2015 @ 21:55:25
I would say the truth, Ritu. I am not biased, I am amazed 😉
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Jul 29, 2015 @ 21:58:28
😚😘 you’re too sweet sis!
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Jul 29, 2015 @ 21:59:21
❤ ❤ ❤ 🙂
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Jul 29, 2015 @ 22:01:26
💗💗💗
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Jul 29, 2015 @ 22:01:52
😀
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Jul 29, 2015 @ 19:05:35
Oh I think it’s lovely 🙂
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Jul 29, 2015 @ 19:07:41
Thank you Judy!
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Jul 29, 2015 @ 18:58:44
I think it’s brill sis it’s better than what I’ve come up with so far☺
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Jul 29, 2015 @ 19:07:01
I wanted to go further to be honest… Oh the ideas that came, about this woman! Da,n the 100 word limit!! Lol!
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Jul 29, 2015 @ 19:09:56
Oooh you. Lend me a hundred😉
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Jul 29, 2015 @ 20:08:30
If I had any spare, I’d give em to you!
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Jul 29, 2015 @ 20:12:53
You said you had loads😢😜☺
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Jul 29, 2015 @ 20:16:43
Lol! I thought you were asking for 100 more words for your own story… You meant you want 100 words of ideas?! Duh! I’m so silly!
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Jul 29, 2015 @ 20:18:17
Yeah you are😂😂😂😂😂😂😂 in fact you could do a guest post for my fff lol
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Jul 29, 2015 @ 20:20:24
Lol!!! An idea… But a cheats one… Why don’t you write a prequel to mine? Why was this garden and bench so special for the woman!
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Jul 29, 2015 @ 20:22:02
Ha I could answer that. Lol.
No that’s cheating I’ll sort it
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Jul 29, 2015 @ 20:25:11
Lol!!! I know, and you’ll smash it too!
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Jul 29, 2015 @ 20:29:16
I hope☺
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Jul 29, 2015 @ 20:31:09
I have faith!
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Jul 29, 2015 @ 20:38:19
Thankyou☺
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Jul 29, 2015 @ 21:30:05
😊
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