Its that time of week again, for the haiku challenge set by the lovely Ron. Click here to see the challenge.
The prompt words are Rise & Save
Two entries from me this time!
Help…
I watch the water
Slowly rising up ahead
…who will save me now?
Bake Off Heats Heat
Checking my souffle
Rising high in the oven
…Enough to save me?













Aug 28, 2015 @ 13:24:30
A souffle haiku how imaginative!
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Aug 28, 2015 @ 17:19:22
Thank you! 😊
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Aug 25, 2015 @ 22:54:22
Hello Ritu! Both your haiku are good. Unique use of the prompt words. 🙂
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Aug 26, 2015 @ 15:06:32
Thank you!
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Aug 18, 2015 @ 15:54:19
First one scared for the impending danger. Second Haiku makes me want to cheer you on. I hope your souffle doesn’t fall. Very clever. And very hot topic your first Haiku. Well, expressed. jk 🙂
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Aug 18, 2015 @ 15:56:29
Thank you! I guess I just write what comes to mind first… And sometimes it really hits the mark!
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Aug 18, 2015 @ 15:57:52
Well, these two Haiku succeeded with a bulls-eye! 😀
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Aug 18, 2015 @ 16:02:21
Ace! Thank you for the encouragement!
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Aug 18, 2015 @ 16:09:36
Always! 😀
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Aug 18, 2015 @ 16:13:23
😊
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Aug 17, 2015 @ 21:23:51
Both of them have turned up good. I like second one more.. 🙂
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Aug 17, 2015 @ 21:41:16
Thanks Prakash!!! 😊
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Aug 17, 2015 @ 17:34:05
Wonderful dear Ritu, you are amazing. Thank you, love, nia
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Aug 17, 2015 @ 18:12:49
Aw thank you Nia!! 😊😊😊
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Aug 17, 2015 @ 17:31:42
Ass usual Ritu you have come up with a couple of rackers! 🙂
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Aug 17, 2015 @ 18:11:26
Thanks Judy!!! 😊😊😊
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Aug 17, 2015 @ 18:13:47
Oooh sorry, I have just noticed the typo!! That is an unfortunate one! 🙂
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Aug 17, 2015 @ 18:18:04
Lol! Thought you were complimenting my bust! 😜
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Aug 17, 2015 @ 18:19:16
Ha Ha! I am sure it is a very nice bust too 🙂
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Aug 17, 2015 @ 18:23:59
Hee Hee!
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Aug 17, 2015 @ 17:16:48
Very good shuffle! 🎺 You are a poet, Ritu.
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Aug 17, 2015 @ 17:06:03
They are both excellent, Ritu! 🙂
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Aug 17, 2015 @ 17:16:21
Thanks Erika! 😊
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Aug 17, 2015 @ 18:48:37
😀😀😀
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