Chapter 2 was posted a couple of hours ago… here.
Please take a few moments to read, and let me know what you think…
I am relying on your feedback to see whether I should finish this story… I’m posting weekly for a few weeks…
It’s not often I request something, so pretty please!!! And if you missed the link… It’s here!
But I Smile Anyway... 
Aug 20, 2015 @ 05:19:56
Yeah, I don’t think Ravi and Aashi will make it 😦
For the part where she ran out of the bedroom, I think you should move the paragraph about him missing her above the one where she actually ran out and the two paragraphs after that, so it reads more chronologically. Just a thought 🙂 Very spicy.
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Aug 20, 2015 @ 09:45:45
Thanks for that! I’ll look into it!
I am so grateful for your feedback!
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Aug 20, 2015 @ 00:47:41
It could go any way from here. That’s the fun of writing, Ritu. Can they work things out or is he going to be a rat?
Leslie
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Aug 20, 2015 @ 09:43:05
Oh I have a few chapters already… but you need to tune in again to find out what the next turn is! Thank you for reading though!
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Aug 20, 2015 @ 14:56:48
Looking forward to it, Ritu.
Leslie
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Aug 20, 2015 @ 15:52:22
Thank you Leslie! 😊
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Aug 19, 2015 @ 23:10:45
Always keep writing Ritu, if no one else needs to know what happens to the characters and how they develop. You need to find out yourself and you can only do that by getting their story down on paper.
I’ve just read chapter 1, really liked it – so get writing the rest 📝
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Aug 19, 2015 @ 23:14:57
Thank you so much Frank!!? I shall get back to it!!!
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