Tuesday means prompt night from.The Book Blogger, Matt, for a piece of flash fictionnot more than 100 words, based on a song prompt of his choice.
This week, is the new Adele song, ‘Hello’.
Check out the prompt here.
Hello…
A small word, isn’t it? But can be filled with so many possibilities.
The sign of new beginnings, a smile, a shake of hand, a chance that a new relationship may blossom.
And that one word started a chain of events so long, that I almost forget it was that one word that started it.
Bye…
An even shorter word…
3 letters that can gut you.
And gut me, they did. I don’t know what I did, but watching you with your bag in your hand, walking down the path, after uttering that word… I felt my world explode….
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Dec 01, 2015 @ 16:39:34
A sad piece. A scenario repeated countless times in countless lives. I particularly loved what you said about the possibilities inherent in Hello, though. Spot on!
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Dec 01, 2015 @ 18:50:30
Thank you 😊
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Dec 01, 2015 @ 04:03:51
Sad and poignant… but hey, it happens… that’s iife, summed up in 100 words. Excellent.
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Dec 01, 2015 @ 07:45:26
Thank you Curtis 😊
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Nov 30, 2015 @ 20:40:12
I really enjoyed the way you used the emotions subtly evoked by these words, and the gentle use of the ellipses really added to the piece.
Best, Matt
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Nov 30, 2015 @ 20:40:47
Thank you Matt, I enjoyed tge prompt!
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Nov 25, 2015 @ 11:10:03
Great use of gut to convey visceral emotions love it
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Nov 25, 2015 @ 18:21:27
Thanks Geoff… Sometimes things just flow 😊
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Nov 25, 2015 @ 00:56:57
Brilliant sis this is great. Love it
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Nov 25, 2015 @ 07:40:44
Thanks bro!
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