Hugs – The prompt Sacha has given us for her Writespiration challenge this week.
I love a good hug! I think they can solve so many ills!
I wrote a little poem this time…
A cuddle, a hug, a squeeze
There’s nothing more likely to please.
It’s just like a smile, it costs nothing to you
But a well-timed hug , there’s a lot it can do
The shoulder squeeze, a solidarity stance
A hug with a shrug, well they do it in France!
The cuddles with children they warm the heart
Snuggles with your Dearest, never to part
But I have to say, the best hug I’ve had
Is the deep embrace I get from my Dad.
Sacha Black
Jul 08, 2016 @ 15:32:25
awwwwwww this was so lovely, and I loved the last two lines.
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Ritu
Jul 08, 2016 @ 16:22:19
Thank you Sacha ! Love my Pops hugs!
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jademwong
Jul 05, 2016 @ 20:01:55
This was wonderful! The lyrical feel of the words, the lines just jumped and danced in such a whimsical way. And a hug from a father is definitely one of the best hugs of all 🙂
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Ritu
Jul 05, 2016 @ 20:12:21
Thank you so much! 😊
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Al Lane
Jun 30, 2016 @ 08:40:47
Aw, that’s lovely x
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Ritu
Jun 30, 2016 @ 12:20:26
Thanks Al! 😊
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Judy Martin
Jun 30, 2016 @ 08:09:00
Lovely poem sis, and spot on too! 🙂
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Ritu
Jun 30, 2016 @ 12:19:33
Thank you sis! 😊😊😊😊
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Erika Kind
Jun 30, 2016 @ 06:57:51
Oh, is that lovely, Sis 💖
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Ritu
Jun 30, 2016 @ 07:00:34
Thank you sis 💕💝❤️
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Erika Kind
Jun 30, 2016 @ 07:11:21
💖💖💖
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Marje @ Kyrosmagica
Jun 30, 2016 @ 06:33:44
Lovely hug poem Ritu. It truly captures a hug so well!
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Ritu
Jun 30, 2016 @ 06:57:10
Thank you Marje! 😊
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shandraeats
Jun 29, 2016 @ 23:46:10
Beautiful!!
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Ritu
Jun 30, 2016 @ 06:51:24
Thank you 😊
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kphoenix1
Jun 29, 2016 @ 22:34:03
It’s heart warming. I love it!
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Ritu
Jun 29, 2016 @ 22:38:21
Thank you ☺
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kphoenix1
Jun 29, 2016 @ 22:45:55
You’re welcome
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Shadeau
Jun 29, 2016 @ 22:16:52
This warms my heart 🙂
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Ritu
Jun 29, 2016 @ 22:31:01
Thanks ! 🙂
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Shadeau
Jun 29, 2016 @ 22:47:30
Welcome 🙂
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