RonovanWrites #Weekly #Haiku #Poetry Prompt #Challenge #123 Breathe&New

Lovely Ron’s Haiku prompt this week.


Breathe & New

I went in two different directions today!


The first breath taken
A joyful new beginning
A cry fills the air

Ritu 2016


Temperatures raised
Deep breathing quickly shallows
A new climax reached

Ritu 2016

32 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. jazzytower
    Nov 21, 2016 @ 02:21:09

    Yeah, that first one is as a result of the second one, lol! Love them both:)

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  2. Judy E Martin
    Nov 16, 2016 @ 14:51:32

    Perfect, BOTH of them! πŸ™‚

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  3. Fourth Generation Farmgirl
    Nov 15, 2016 @ 19:26:51

    Both are fantastic!

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  4. Erika Kind
    Nov 15, 2016 @ 11:08:16

    Very good directions, both! Beautiful and intriguing!!!

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  5. Wild Daffodil
    Nov 15, 2016 @ 11:03:07

    Both exquisite!

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  6. Mother Willow
    Nov 15, 2016 @ 02:32:19

    Drumming does bring vibrations to creativity…. Great haiku, especially the first one. Second one is definitely drumming inspired….hehe….great imagery.

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  7. Shivangi
    Nov 15, 2016 @ 02:06:27

    Very creative RituπŸ˜€πŸ‘

    Liked by 1 person


  8. Ruth
    Nov 14, 2016 @ 23:45:22

    Lovely πŸ™‚

    Liked by 1 person


  9. willowdot21
    Nov 14, 2016 @ 23:26:11

    Not too far apart , those subjects! I did one on childbirth too, in my trio! Beautiful Haiku Ritu beautiful! xxxx

    Liked by 1 person


  10. dornahainds
    Nov 14, 2016 @ 23:20:51

    Fantastic series! 🌹

    Liked by 1 person


  11. Prakash Hegade
    Nov 14, 2016 @ 23:16:49

    The first one, loved it! πŸ™‚

    Liked by 1 person


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