WRITESPIRATION #109 52 WEEKS IN 52 WORDS WEEK 13 – The Break

Sacha’s #writespiration prompt this week.

Your challenge is to write your story using the weekly theme/prompt and write it in just 52 words…. EXACTLY, no more, no less.

The Break

I don’t know when, exactly, that it happened, but it did.

All the signs were there, but I ignored them.

If I happened to notice anything amiss, I glossed over it.

Life was good, honestly. We were fine.

Then, one day I looked at my heart.

The break was clear to see.

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18 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Sacha Black
    May 03, 2017 @ 12:31:17

    Yeah and this has happened to so many people – myself included and man does it hurt when it comes out of the blue – it’s like a death.

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  2. willowdot21
    Mar 30, 2017 @ 21:03:30

    OH! Sis this is hart breaking and sadly so often the case . 💜💝💗

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  3. Judy E Martin
    Mar 30, 2017 @ 19:39:44

    Aa sad one this week Sis, but a great take 🙂

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  4. dornahainds
    Mar 30, 2017 @ 17:30:28

    Aye! A beautiful tragedy.

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  5. Erika Kind
    Mar 30, 2017 @ 07:12:41

    Wow, great take, sis!

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  6. syl65
    Mar 30, 2017 @ 04:40:36

    Powerful Sister!!

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