TJ’s Household Haiku – Rain & Shiver

TJ’s back with his haiku prompts:

Nature reserve Perth

Rain & Shiver

I went with a 3/5/3 Haiku first…

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Image from Pixabay

Leaves shiver
With the weight of rain
Drops falling

Ritu 2017

Then a tanka

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Image from Pixabay

The rain falls in sheets
I’m wet and shivering
uncontrollably
Natures playing games again
Typical British summer

Ritu 2017

And the traditional 5/7/5 English haiku

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Image from Pixabay

A raindrop trickles
Sending shivers down my spine
Like your feathered touch

Ritu 2017

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24 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Reena Saxena
    Sep 09, 2017 @ 04:55:56

    This is one of your best, Ritu!

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  3. micketalbot
    Aug 30, 2017 @ 01:38:02

    Someone else said it too, a triple treat, and the last one delightfully raunchy..

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  4. pagingme
    Aug 29, 2017 @ 02:15:29

    Reply

  5. dornahainds
    Aug 28, 2017 @ 20:03:57

    Brava.. 🥀🥀🥀🥀

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  6. Judy E Martin
    Aug 28, 2017 @ 15:32:00

    Loved these Sis, especially the last one….steamy!!! 🙂

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  7. Annette Rochelle Aben
    Aug 28, 2017 @ 14:52:11

    A triple treat!

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  8. Miriam Hurdle
    Aug 28, 2017 @ 04:23:48

    I like all three of them. Well written, Ritu!

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  9. Erika Kind
    Aug 28, 2017 @ 03:29:31

    Yay, great takes, sis. I like that you used different styles 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

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  10. willowdot21
    Aug 28, 2017 @ 01:56:45

    Beautiful all three

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  11. Mr. Militant Negro
    Aug 27, 2017 @ 22:57:50

    Reblogged this on The Militant Negro™.

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