TJ’s back with his haiku prompts:
Rain & Shiver
I went with a 3/5/3 Haiku first…
Leaves shiver
With the weight of rain
Drops fallingRitu 2017
Then a tanka
The rain falls in sheets
I’m wet and shivering
uncontrollably
Natures playing games again
Typical British summerRitu 2017
And the traditional 5/7/5 English haiku
A raindrop trickles
Sending shivers down my spine
Like your feathered touchRitu 2017
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Reena Saxena
Sep 09, 2017 @ 04:55:56
This is one of your best, Ritu!
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Ritu
Sep 09, 2017 @ 07:34:48
Thank you Reena!
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micketalbot
Aug 30, 2017 @ 01:38:02
Someone else said it too, a triple treat, and the last one delightfully raunchy..
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Ritu
Aug 30, 2017 @ 07:50:12
Thank you Mick!
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pagingme
Aug 29, 2017 @ 02:15:29
https://pagingme.wordpress.com/2017/08/29/for-tjs-household-haiku-shiver-and-rain/
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dornahainds
Aug 28, 2017 @ 20:03:57
Brava.. 🥀🥀🥀🥀
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Ritu
Aug 28, 2017 @ 20:12:01
Merci!
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Judy E Martin
Aug 28, 2017 @ 15:32:00
Loved these Sis, especially the last one….steamy!!! 🙂
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Ritu
Aug 28, 2017 @ 15:32:35
🙂 thanks sis 😁
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Annette Rochelle Aben
Aug 28, 2017 @ 14:52:11
A triple treat!
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Ritu
Aug 28, 2017 @ 15:30:51
Why thank you maam!!!!
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Miriam Hurdle
Aug 28, 2017 @ 04:23:48
I like all three of them. Well written, Ritu!
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Ritu
Aug 28, 2017 @ 09:19:29
Thank you Miriam!
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Miriam Hurdle
Aug 29, 2017 @ 00:07:40
You’re welcome, Ritu!
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Erika Kind
Aug 28, 2017 @ 03:29:31
Yay, great takes, sis. I like that you used different styles 🙂
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Ritu
Aug 28, 2017 @ 09:19:12
Thanks sis! Thought I’d get creative!
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Erika Kind
Aug 28, 2017 @ 15:15:22
And you are very successful with that😉
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Ritu
Aug 28, 2017 @ 15:32:15
Lol thank you 😚
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Erika Kind
Aug 28, 2017 @ 18:53:30
😁
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willowdot21
Aug 28, 2017 @ 01:56:45
Beautiful all three
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Ritu
Aug 28, 2017 @ 09:18:57
Thank you sis!
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willowdot21
Aug 28, 2017 @ 09:25:04
💗💜
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Mr. Militant Negro
Aug 27, 2017 @ 22:57:50
Reblogged this on The Militant Negro™.
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