RonovanWrites #Weekly #Haiku #Poetry Prompt #Challenge #231 Goal&Cup

It’s that time of the week Peeps, and this time, Ronovan has given us the following words:

Goal & Cup

I am sorry… I couldn’t write a true haiku for this, nature did not comply, so a senryu instead, with a little twist, as I rue my weight gain!

Cup runneth over
As does my excess blubber
Goal weight not achieved!

Ritu 2018
Ronovan Writes Haiku Challenge Image 2016

24 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. willowdot21
    Dec 12, 2018 @ 18:41:46

    Oh! sis 💜💜💜💜

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  2. syl65
    Dec 11, 2018 @ 02:24:23

    🤗

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  3. pranabaxom
    Dec 10, 2018 @ 20:53:09

    Blubber is nature

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  4. Hélène Vaillant
    Dec 10, 2018 @ 20:41:30

    It is a very truthful senryu. Diet and weight loss, what a struggle it can be.

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  5. OIKOS™-Publishing
    Dec 10, 2018 @ 20:41:14

    Well done change, Sis! Michael

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  6. Annette Rochelle Aben
    Dec 10, 2018 @ 20:36:59

    Weight comes and goes but your LIGHT shines brightly no matter

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  7. Erika Kind
    Dec 10, 2018 @ 20:13:56

    🤷‍♀️

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  8. pensitivity101
    Dec 10, 2018 @ 20:03:28

    Oh Ritu! Did the Keno not work for you afterall? I;m still struggling with SW, so you have my sympathy!

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