It’s time to get back into Charli’s 99-word flash fiction challenge!
February 7, 2019, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story that includes a sign. It can be a posted sign, a universal sign, a wonder. Go where the prompt leads.
Here goes.
Why Did I Get Up?
Why Did I Get Up?
Ritu Bhathal 2019
Nina dragged herself to sitting position. Why did the alarm have to go off?
She swung her feet out of bed and one landed on a squidgy mess.
Great.
The cat had been eating silly things, and deposited his sick at her bedside.
The shower was no better. Her flatmate had used up all the hot water.
Even her morning coffee was blighted with the fact there was no milk left.
After three hours of sitting on a bus, trying to reach her workplace, Nina gave up.
All signs that she should just have stayed in bed this morning.
H.R.R. Gorman
Feb 14, 2019 @ 21:09:08
The line “the cat was eating silly things” spoke to me. It’s like 75% of pet ownership is monitoring what goes in, and the other 25% is monitoring what comes out.
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Ritu
Feb 14, 2019 @ 21:25:01
Oh my God, totally!
I recently recovered a rather large chewed rubber band… don’t even know where he found it! But boy was there a mess when it came out!
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H.R.R. Gorman
Feb 14, 2019 @ 23:34:42
Oh no! Rubber bands wreak havoc with the ol’ insides, that’s for sure!
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Ritu
Feb 15, 2019 @ 06:48:36
I don’t even know where he found it… He’s a house cat, and I don’t have large rubber bands stored anywhere!
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H.R.R. Gorman
Feb 15, 2019 @ 12:46:52
Hmm… sounds like your Dobby may have brought it from a neighbor’s!
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Ritu
Feb 15, 2019 @ 17:09:46
That’s just it, he doesn’t go out !
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H.R.R. Gorman
Feb 15, 2019 @ 20:43:44
I meant you have secret house elves, like Dobby from Harry Potter, who bring him things.
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Ritu
Feb 15, 2019 @ 21:10:07
Ha ha! My bad!!!
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robbiesinspiration
Feb 13, 2019 @ 03:54:59
Poor Nina, she should have stayed in bed.
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Ritu
Feb 13, 2019 @ 07:02:13
She really should!
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Michele Jones
Feb 12, 2019 @ 14:07:24
Poor Nina. She should have stayed in bed.
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Ritu
Feb 12, 2019 @ 15:37:55
She should have!
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Charli Mills
Feb 12, 2019 @ 05:37:42
The signs are all there — bed was the place to stay. The funniest was the gift from the cat.
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Ritu
Feb 12, 2019 @ 07:21:34
It happens…
Sonu Singh loves to leave us presents or surprises like that!
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D. Avery @shiftnshake
Feb 11, 2019 @ 23:44:50
Day’s not over; could get better.
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Ritu
Feb 12, 2019 @ 07:20:04
There is that…
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Still Loved...Still Missed
Feb 10, 2019 @ 09:04:25
A nice read. Something that all of us have gone through, at some point.
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Ritu
Feb 10, 2019 @ 09:12:06
Thank you.
Yes, I have a few of those days!
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susanzutautas
Feb 09, 2019 @ 20:30:22
Definitely, a good day to go back to bed.
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Ritu
Feb 09, 2019 @ 23:48:43
Definitely!
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explorereikiworld
Feb 09, 2019 @ 19:49:07
And yet she dared to climb the bus to work! Bravo !!
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Ritu
Feb 09, 2019 @ 23:48:30
She tried… but soon turned back lol !
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syl65
Feb 09, 2019 @ 17:06:32
We all want to just throw the sheets over our heads hug the bed, lol.
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Ritu
Feb 09, 2019 @ 17:31:02
God yes!
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syl65
Feb 09, 2019 @ 18:31:37
😴😄
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pranabaxom
Feb 09, 2019 @ 16:44:57
“Why Did I Get Up?” – because nature called😞
Nice one Ritu.
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Ritu
Feb 09, 2019 @ 16:49:13
😊 Thanks
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willowdot21
Feb 09, 2019 @ 08:59:54
Not a good start to the day, Sis. She should of stayed in bed!!💜
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Ritu
Feb 09, 2019 @ 09:23:31
She should have indeed!!!
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willowdot21
Feb 09, 2019 @ 10:50:15
Lol
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OIKOS™-Publishing
Feb 08, 2019 @ 23:46:34
Love it! Hope you had not mentioned Sonu. 😉
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Ritu
Feb 09, 2019 @ 07:31:45
Nope… He does these things in other places 😂
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OIKOS™-Publishing
Feb 09, 2019 @ 12:45:22
😂 In front of the neighbours doors? LoL
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Ritu
Feb 09, 2019 @ 12:48:29
😂
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tsepotheview
Feb 08, 2019 @ 23:04:51
Nice story…
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Ritu
Feb 09, 2019 @ 07:30:29
Thank you 😊
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dray0308
Feb 08, 2019 @ 22:31:39
Reblogged this on Dream Big, Dream Often.
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Annette Rochelle Aben
Feb 08, 2019 @ 22:23:12
Cat puke… da worst!
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Ritu
Feb 08, 2019 @ 22:49:52
Totally!!!
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Rebecca Moon Ruark
Feb 08, 2019 @ 22:03:11
I know days like that. For sure. Tomorrow–Saturday–there will be reasons plenty to get up. Enjoy the weekend, Ritu!
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Ritu
Feb 08, 2019 @ 22:04:33
I look forward to the lie in first Rebecca! 😉
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Erika Kind
Feb 08, 2019 @ 21:43:22
I don’t even need so many signs to be confirmed it was better to simply stay in bed… lol!
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Ritu
Feb 08, 2019 @ 21:49:58
Me neither sis 😂
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Erika Kind
Feb 08, 2019 @ 22:10:45
✋😂
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johnrieber
Feb 08, 2019 @ 20:47:05
Nice job! I will share my attempt tomorrow!
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Ritu
Feb 08, 2019 @ 20:57:39
Perfect thanks John❤️
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