Charli’s Carrot Ranch fiction prompt:
August 29, 2019, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story about the safebreaker’s daughter. Who is she, what did she do, and where? Go where the prompt leads you!
Jailbreaker
It’s about time I carved a name out for myself. I’m fed up of everyone thinking of him whenever they see me. Mary. That’s my name. Not the Safebreaker’s Daughter. It wasn’t so bad, when things were good. No one could touch him. And we never did without. Then he went and got himself caught. Hand still in the jewellers safe. He’s sitting in jail now, rotting away. I need to do something. Something that will change the way they all talk about me. No more Safebreaker’s Daughter. No, soon, I’ll be known as the Jailbreaker. Dad, I’m coming.
Jennie
Sep 06, 2019 @ 02:27:42
This was good, Ritu!
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Ritu
Sep 06, 2019 @ 06:58:16
Thanks Jennie 🥰
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Jennie
Sep 06, 2019 @ 12:15:07
You’re welcome, Ritu. 😍
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Charli Mills
Sep 02, 2019 @ 04:30:43
They indeed underestimated her! I like what you did to round out the story of the Safebreaker’s Daughter, Ritu!
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Ritu
Sep 02, 2019 @ 06:47:56
Thank you Charli. I really wasn’t sure at first, but I got there!
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OIKOS™-Publishing
Sep 01, 2019 @ 18:32:48
Sorry, Sis! Seems i had a longer delay in reading your postings. But i remember Ritu the burglar, opening windows with a scredriver, and showing a bubble butt to the neighbours. Lol Michael
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Ritu
Sep 01, 2019 @ 20:28:11
Lol!
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OIKOS™-Publishing
Sep 01, 2019 @ 21:14:17
😁
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H.R.R. Gorman
Aug 31, 2019 @ 21:01:08
Hahaha! Nice twist!
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Ritu
Aug 31, 2019 @ 22:01:16
Thank you!
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Shweta Suresh
Aug 31, 2019 @ 12:32:55
Ohh looks like Mary’s very determined! Good one, Ritu.
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Ritu
Aug 31, 2019 @ 13:04:01
I think she is!!
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Erika Kind
Aug 31, 2019 @ 10:04:32
Cool story and ending, sis!
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Ritu
Aug 31, 2019 @ 13:02:09
Thanks Sis!
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Erika Kind
Sep 01, 2019 @ 10:46:12
💖
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Susanne Swanson
Aug 30, 2019 @ 23:57:05
Great ending! Loved it!
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Ritu
Aug 31, 2019 @ 07:41:26
Thank you 🥰
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Michael Ogazie
Aug 30, 2019 @ 22:23:30
Good job! 👍
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Ritu
Aug 30, 2019 @ 23:26:06
Many thanks!
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stevetanham
Aug 30, 2019 @ 21:49:59
Great plot, Ritu!
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Ritu
Aug 30, 2019 @ 23:25:58
Thanks Steve!
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Annette Rochelle Aben
Aug 30, 2019 @ 19:39:57
moving up in the world!
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Ritu
Aug 30, 2019 @ 23:25:17
Totally!!
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willowdot21
Aug 30, 2019 @ 19:28:40
Excellent take Sis 💜
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Ritu
Aug 30, 2019 @ 23:25:07
Thank you sis 💜
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willowdot21
Aug 31, 2019 @ 06:57:57
A pleasure Sis 💜
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meenawalia
Aug 30, 2019 @ 19:00:26
Dads lil girl
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Ritu
Aug 30, 2019 @ 19:00:46
Truly!!
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Jacquie Biggar
Aug 30, 2019 @ 17:55:59
Nice! She’s her father’s daughter, for sure 🙂
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Ritu
Aug 30, 2019 @ 18:28:25
For sure!
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