Charli’s Carrot Ranch prompt this week:
September 19, 2019, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story about an interlude. It can be a pause between two key moments, the pause between acts in a play, an intermission, or a temporary amusement Go where the prompt leads you!
Sweet Interlude
Sophia leaned against the headboard, taking a drag of her cigarette.
She smiled at her reflection in the mirror; hair messed up, lipstick a mere stain left on her lips.
She watched him pull his pants back on.
“Hurry, Sophia!”
Marco slipped his shirt on, still buttoning as he left.
Voices. Her supervisor was coming.
She flushed the cigarette down the toilet, changed, and flung the door open.
“Oh Sir, these guests, too much! Smoking in here. Smell it!”
She bustled out, to the next room waiting to be cleaned, wondering when her next interlude with Marco would be…
Norah
Sep 26, 2019 @ 11:43:08
Just in the nick of time. Good one, Ritu.
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Ritu
Sep 26, 2019 @ 12:50:24
Thanks Norah! ❤
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Jim Borden
Sep 24, 2019 @ 19:16:46
so that’s what goes on at hotels! 🙂
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Ritu
Sep 24, 2019 @ 19:21:45
Now you know 😉
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Jim Borden
Sep 24, 2019 @ 19:30:22
thanks for filling me in!
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robertawrites235681907
Sep 24, 2019 @ 09:07:57
Great use of the prompt word, Ritu.
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Ritu
Sep 24, 2019 @ 13:05:28
Thank you Robbie!
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OIKOS™-Publishing
Sep 22, 2019 @ 19:55:48
A little erotic one. 😉 Well done, Sis! Keep on! LoL Michael
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Ritu
Sep 22, 2019 @ 20:05:55
Thanks Bro 😁
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OIKOS™-Publishing
Sep 22, 2019 @ 20:49:19
😁😁
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Jennie
Sep 21, 2019 @ 15:11:56
This was good, Ritu!
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Ritu
Sep 21, 2019 @ 15:15:28
Glad you enjoyed, Jennie!
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Jennie
Sep 21, 2019 @ 16:41:17
I did!
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Michael Ogazie
Sep 21, 2019 @ 09:28:38
Wonderful post!
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Ritu
Sep 21, 2019 @ 10:01:49
Thank you!
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syl65
Sep 21, 2019 @ 04:36:06
The Hanky Panky Inn!!
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Ritu
Sep 21, 2019 @ 09:23:53
Hee hee 😂😂
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syl65
Sep 21, 2019 @ 22:23:36
😅😂🤣
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Charli Mills
Sep 21, 2019 @ 01:08:47
Excellent inuendos on multiple levels to craft a sly story in 99 words. I like this Sophia!
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Ritu
Sep 21, 2019 @ 09:23:21
I think she was chanelling Loren until she remembered her job 😁
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Michael
Sep 21, 2019 @ 00:17:44
Good one Ritu, I like it.
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Ritu
Sep 21, 2019 @ 09:22:34
Thank you Michael! 🥰
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dornahainds
Sep 20, 2019 @ 22:31:34
Interesting 😎
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Ritu
Sep 21, 2019 @ 00:11:02
Thanks Dorna 🙃
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Erika Kind
Sep 20, 2019 @ 21:05:54
Haha, certain situations or desires can make very inventive… lol
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Ritu
Sep 21, 2019 @ 00:11:37
They can indeed sis 😉
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Erika Kind
Sep 21, 2019 @ 16:49:28
😄
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Rebecca Moon Ruark
Sep 20, 2019 @ 20:50:56
Fantastic–sassy and saucy! Loved it!
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Ritu
Sep 21, 2019 @ 00:14:22
Thanks Rebecca!!
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joylennick
Sep 20, 2019 @ 17:56:32
What chamber-maids get up to, eh! xx
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Ritu
Sep 20, 2019 @ 18:36:40
I know!!
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Annette Rochelle Aben
Sep 20, 2019 @ 17:29:23
hot and spicy
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Ritu
Sep 20, 2019 @ 17:43:30
Yup 🥰
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