Murmur #writephoto

Sue’s #WritePhoto prompt:

It started with 
A murmur
Then someone screamed
Blue murder

Startled starlings
Scattered
But for me
All that mattered

Was to catch that
Last glimpse of sun
After all it would be
My last one

My last sunset
My last night
My last breath
Yes, that's right

Then they grabbed me
From the wall
Stopped me quickly
Before the fall

Ritu 2019
#writephoto

26 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Michele Jones
    Sep 26, 2019 @ 13:27:27

    Sad that someone can thing that way. Well told.

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  3. jenanita01
    Sep 22, 2019 @ 09:39:45

    Reblogged this on anita dawes and jaye marie.

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  5. Jennie
    Sep 21, 2019 @ 14:36:02

    Well done, Ritu!

    Liked by 2 people

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  6. Erika Kind
    Sep 20, 2019 @ 21:03:53

    Funny, sis!!

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  7. syl65
    Sep 20, 2019 @ 14:40:39

    Sounds like Humpty enjoyed it until the end. Wonderful, Sister 💜

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  8. OIKOS™-Publishing
    Sep 20, 2019 @ 14:38:38

    💜💜

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  9. willowdot21
    Sep 20, 2019 @ 11:34:41

    This is brilliant Ritu, loved it 💜

    Liked by 2 people

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  10. Annette Rochelle Aben
    Sep 20, 2019 @ 07:15:20

    took me right along with you

    Liked by 3 people

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  11. Sue Vincent
    Sep 20, 2019 @ 06:54:09

    I couldn’t help thinking of Humpty Dumpty for some reason 😉

    Liked by 3 people

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