After a brief examination hiatus, The Book Blogger is back with his Flash Fiction Foray challenge..it entails working a selected song title into a 100 word story… Oooh its been a
while, but here goes!!!
This time the song is a true classic “Hello” by the legend Lionel Ritchie, my brother’s favourite singer!
He sits across the room, looking over at me. I’m just as bad. Glancing over his way, catching his eye, then rapidly glancing down. He’s got the shirt, holding the flowers, like he said he would. I probably look totally different to what he was expecting, but that was my plan.
I do that, you know, try to seem anonymous, so I can decide if I really want to meet them. If I don’t like the
look of them, I walk away…
But too late, he’s coming this way! He steps up, saying
“Hello, is it me you’re looking for?”….
Hope you liked it! And go on, have a go too!!!
But I Smile Anyway... 
Jun 23, 2015 @ 00:40:51
Working that title into the last line was totally cool! Well done!
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Jun 23, 2015 @ 06:54:50
Thanks! 😀
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Jun 18, 2015 @ 16:01:06
Hi Ritu, thanks for participating again! I loved the way you worked the line in at the end, and the piece was particularly enthralling.
Best, Matt
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Jun 18, 2015 @ 16:51:11
Glad you’re back doing the challenge! I’m pushing it for you too! 😊
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Jun 18, 2015 @ 16:52:57
Thank you very much, I really appreciate it!
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Jun 18, 2015 @ 16:53:17
😊 no worries!
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Jun 17, 2015 @ 19:58:21
Loved it, especially the way your last line worked.
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Jun 17, 2015 @ 20:19:57
Thank you!!! 😊
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Jun 17, 2015 @ 19:27:09
Ha Ha! That was a very clever last line! 🙂
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Jun 17, 2015 @ 19:29:07
Did’ja like it? Lol! 😊
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Jun 17, 2015 @ 19:34:00
Loved it!
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Jun 17, 2015 @ 19:34:22
😊
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Jun 17, 2015 @ 19:24:34
I have nominated your blog for the Versatile Blogger Award. Click the link for more information: https://rebirthoflisa.wordpress.com/2015/06/17/versatile-blogger-award-2/
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Jun 17, 2015 @ 18:21:37
Absolutely brilliant Ritu. And a great song😊
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Jun 17, 2015 @ 18:48:46
Thanks Rich!! I really enjoyed this challenge, and I hope others try it too!!! Its a weekly one x
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Jun 17, 2015 @ 18:52:04
I might give it a go if I ever catch up with awards and stuff. Looks fun.x😊
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Jun 17, 2015 @ 19:00:16
Lol! It is fun, and only 100 words… I did them all so far!!
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Jun 17, 2015 @ 19:05:19
I’ll give it a whirl hopefully work will be a little less busy over the next couple of weeks so I might get chance😊
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Jun 17, 2015 @ 19:17:45
Make sure you do!!
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Jun 17, 2015 @ 20:49:04
Does it only have to be 100 words mines more like 160😊
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Jun 17, 2015 @ 21:25:06
The original rules were 100.. that is the challenge lol!
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Jun 17, 2015 @ 21:35:07
Well I need to rethink it then I got carried away😊😊
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Jun 17, 2015 @ 22:24:49
He he! I get obsessive about counting the words, again and again lol!!!!
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Jun 17, 2015 @ 22:29:58
Yeah me to specially when I’m knocking it down from
160 to 100 lol. I think I counted right
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Jun 17, 2015 @ 22:32:47
Matt will be so happy you entered. I really hope this challenge kicks off for him!
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Jun 17, 2015 @ 22:39:40
Ive pinged back and followed anyway. Me too it was fun😊
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Jun 17, 2015 @ 22:49:04
😊😊😊
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Jun 17, 2015 @ 21:38:29
I thought i’d done well too I enjoyed it humph back to the drawing board 😊😊
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Jun 17, 2015 @ 22:25:07
I liked your effort!!! 😉
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Jun 17, 2015 @ 22:30:32
It went better than I thought. Thankyou😊😊😊
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Jun 17, 2015 @ 22:33:06
Good on ya!!
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Jun 17, 2015 @ 22:39:57
😉
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Jun 17, 2015 @ 22:11:01
Done had to butcher it but done😊 https://wafflemethis.wordpress.com/2015/06/17/flash-fiction-foray-6/
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Jun 17, 2015 @ 22:30:25
Write well, you did, my Padawan! 😜
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Jun 17, 2015 @ 22:31:10
Thankyou master yoda. Used the force I did.😉
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Jun 17, 2015 @ 22:34:46
Proud, I am… ( this is where I wish I had a Yoda emoticon!!) 👍🏽
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Jun 17, 2015 @ 22:40:25
Lol I’ll just imagine one😊
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Jun 17, 2015 @ 22:49:25
I may have to search!!!
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Jun 17, 2015 @ 22:49:52
You need one master
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Jun 17, 2015 @ 22:52:59
My next task!
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Jun 17, 2015 @ 22:55:14
So get on it then lol.😊😊😊
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Jun 17, 2015 @ 22:55:30
Like a car bonnet 😊
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Jun 17, 2015 @ 22:56:18
On it, indeed!!
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Jun 17, 2015 @ 22:56:53
😉
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Jun 17, 2015 @ 22:51:01
This is for you too https://wafflemethis.wordpress.com/2015/06/17/a-z-of-songs-with-names-in-them-2/
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Jun 17, 2015 @ 22:55:29
Love it!
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Jun 17, 2015 @ 22:56:14
😊
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Jun 17, 2015 @ 17:48:20
Oh, that’s great, Ritu! You are such a genius! I love it. I sang “Hello” once in a concert. The last sentence was music in my ear!
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Jun 17, 2015 @ 18:46:08
Its a great song! Like I said, one of my brother’s favourites! He saw the great guy in concert too, lucky thing!!!
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Jun 17, 2015 @ 18:59:23
That is amazing. I love Lionel Richie.
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Jun 17, 2015 @ 19:00:39
How can anyone now??!!
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Jun 17, 2015 @ 19:02:34
Right!!! I am still dancing on the ceiling when I hear him.
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Jun 17, 2015 @ 19:17:19
All night long, all night!!!
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Jun 17, 2015 @ 19:20:55
…. dancing as a ballerina girl….
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Jun 17, 2015 @ 19:29:58
😊😊😊😊
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Jun 17, 2015 @ 20:04:23
We could write stories with song titles… lol
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Jun 17, 2015 @ 20:20:52
We really could!!!
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Jun 17, 2015 @ 20:23:36
😃
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Jun 17, 2015 @ 20:45:25
😀
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Jun 17, 2015 @ 19:00:50
Not, I mean?!
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Jun 17, 2015 @ 19:02:48
Got ya! 😊
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