FFF #18 – One Day More

The Book Blogger, Matt’s prompt this week from Les Miserables…. ‘One Day More’…. Check out the challenge here!

“Are you ready?”
Mona looked up at Lisa, eyes full of apprehension. “I don’t know Lees… It’s all happened so fast. Am I really ready?”
It had only been a few short weeks since she made the decision to go to the police with the true story of what had happened that night.
And now here she was, a sack of nerves, knowing she was going to have to stand in front of a court full of people, and tell a bunch of strangers her story…
Still, at least he’d get what he deserved…

Just one day more to wait

21 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. calensariel's avatar calensariel
    Nov 10, 2015 @ 06:24:43

    Yeah, you’d get real tense waiting one more day for something like that for dern sure! Nice!

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  3. thebookblogger2014's avatar thebookblogger2014
    Nov 09, 2015 @ 21:17:52

    A very tantalising take, and I love the wordplay!
    Thanks for participating.
    Best, Matt

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  4. curtisbausse's avatar curtisbausse
    Nov 09, 2015 @ 10:16:58

    Another one that lets the reader fill in the story. I like it!

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  5. TanGental's avatar TanGental
    Nov 05, 2015 @ 09:24:19

    That’s good, nice pacing

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  6. Erika's avatar Erika Kind
    Nov 05, 2015 @ 05:01:30

    Fantastic how you approached this, sis! Musicals just work at the moment anyway… 🙂

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  7. amommasview's avatar amommasview
    Nov 05, 2015 @ 00:44:28

    Well done! Love it!

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  8. kritsayvonne's avatar kritsayvonne
    Nov 04, 2015 @ 23:52:11

    Good story! Am I the only one that ended up laughing when I belatedly realised what names I’d read? X

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  9. Fourth Generation Farmgirl's avatar Fourth Generation Farmgirl
    Nov 04, 2015 @ 23:13:03

    I like how you build anticipation. 🙂

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  10. Wafflemethis's avatar wafflemethis
    Nov 04, 2015 @ 22:30:51

    Brilliant Sis love it.😘

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