Monday night means sitting at the kids drum lesson, and thinking up Haiku for the lovely Ronovan, and his weekly haiku challenge. Check it out here.
The prompt works this week are Wolf & Cake… Hmmm interesting… Could be very obvious… Or not!
Dessert
Wolfing down dinner
With my eyes on the dessert
Rich chocolate cake!
Victim – a tanka
Fangs encrusted with
Blood from his many victims
He turns and glances
Fixing me with his cold eyes…
His wolfish stare pins me down.
Marje @ Kyrosmagica
Dec 14, 2015 @ 19:17:37
Very good Ritu, and a tanka too. That cake looks seriously chocolatey…..
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Ritu
Dec 14, 2015 @ 19:26:02
Lol thanks! It does look good, doesn’t it!!!
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jazzytower
Dec 12, 2015 @ 19:18:49
Lovely, and a pretty cake it is too:)
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Ritu
Dec 12, 2015 @ 19:20:53
Thank ypy! ☺🍰
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wafflemethis
Dec 10, 2015 @ 05:33:49
Both amazing sis, love the cake☺
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Ritu
Dec 10, 2015 @ 07:42:45
Thanks bro!
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syl65
Dec 08, 2015 @ 05:13:10
Both are great! I just hope you had a slice of cake before the wolf came along…
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Ritu
Dec 08, 2015 @ 07:54:11
Oh yes… Cake solves everything!!!
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syl65
Dec 08, 2015 @ 14:45:11
Yes, I agree!! Let there be cake!!!
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Ritu
Dec 08, 2015 @ 18:43:01
And more cake!!!
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syl65
Dec 08, 2015 @ 19:00:36
Yes, definitely!
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Marquessa
Dec 08, 2015 @ 04:57:30
Whoa! Excellent job!
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Ritu
Dec 08, 2015 @ 07:53:31
Thank you 😊
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blackcherriess
Dec 08, 2015 @ 03:37:09
both are amazing! love them ❤
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Ritu
Dec 08, 2015 @ 07:53:18
Thank you 😊
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Fourth Generation Farmgirl
Dec 08, 2015 @ 00:21:56
Fantastic, Ritu! Loved them both! 🙂
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Ritu
Dec 08, 2015 @ 00:26:35
Thank you Tonya!
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Wild Daffodil
Dec 07, 2015 @ 23:50:27
Shivers! – i went back to the cake for comfort!
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Ritu
Dec 08, 2015 @ 00:07:37
Lol thanks!
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Olga
Dec 07, 2015 @ 22:02:59
The “Victim” was riveting. The beginning of a suspenseful tale in poetic form. Perfect image.
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Ritu
Dec 07, 2015 @ 22:13:30
Thank you Olga! ☺
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Erika Kind
Dec 07, 2015 @ 21:17:08
Ohhhhh, wow!!! When I saw the cake I thought….. OMG…. craving!!!! But then I read your second Haiku and I forgot the cake…. fantastic, Sis!
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Ritu
Dec 07, 2015 @ 21:54:10
Thanks sis!! It was a hard prompt this week! ☺
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Erika Kind
Dec 07, 2015 @ 22:20:42
But you did creepy good!!!!!!! That was awesome!
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Ritu
Dec 07, 2015 @ 22:22:05
See what sitting there listening to 10 drums all at once does for me?!?? 😜
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Erika Kind
Dec 07, 2015 @ 22:26:11
YEAH…. exactly… they are beating you into “the zone”…. lol
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Ritu
Dec 07, 2015 @ 22:27:06
Oh it’s true!!!! 😂😂
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Erika Kind
Dec 07, 2015 @ 22:29:05
😂 😂 😂
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edwinasepisodes
Dec 07, 2015 @ 20:49:14
You did a great job there Sis. I loved the cake haiku, but the tanka was brilliant!
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Ritu
Dec 07, 2015 @ 20:52:23
Aw thanks sis! I wasn’t overly enamoured with mine, so that means a lot ☺
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edwinasepisodes
Dec 07, 2015 @ 20:53:20
I thought it was a great take on the prompts 🙂
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Ritu
Dec 07, 2015 @ 21:01:28
😘
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