Monday and Haiku time!
Lovely Ron’s prompt can be found here.
Prompt words Life & Path
A threesome today!
Hearts beat, pumping life
Around your body and soul
Through pathways of nerves
Ritu 2016
Many obstacles
Life paths seldom run smoothly
Smooth would be boring
Ritu 2016
A fork in the road
Life could go this way or that
Which way should I choose?
Ritu 2016
Vashti Quiroz-Vega
Apr 18, 2016 @ 23:46:45
All three are great! Loved the second one best. 😉
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Ritu
Apr 19, 2016 @ 06:48:03
Thank you Vashti!
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Fourth Generation Farmgirl
Apr 15, 2016 @ 17:10:31
Very creative, Ritu! 🙂
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Ritu
Apr 15, 2016 @ 17:33:20
Thank you!
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Roz Hill
Apr 15, 2016 @ 12:25:17
We learn from the bumps, so yes smooth is a bore! Enjoyed all three haikus.💚💜💛❤️💙
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Ritu
Apr 15, 2016 @ 12:34:09
Thank you Roz!!!
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Al Lane
Apr 13, 2016 @ 10:05:00
“Smooth would be boring”… I agree… but a bit of smooth now and again might be nice! 🙂
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Ritu
Apr 13, 2016 @ 12:34:32
That’s true too Al!!!
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Al Lane
Apr 13, 2016 @ 13:41:17
🙂
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'Legato.'
Apr 12, 2016 @ 22:54:56
loved all the haikus, ‘specially the heart one ‘cos i have to see the cardiologist. 💗
peace! ^__^v
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Ritu
Apr 12, 2016 @ 22:59:32
Good luck and glad you enjoyed them 😊
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Priceless Joy
Apr 12, 2016 @ 20:26:37
Very good! I like them!
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Ritu
Apr 12, 2016 @ 20:51:34
Thank you 😊😊😊
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Bee Halton
Apr 12, 2016 @ 19:04:39
smooth is boring but I would have liked just a tiny little bit more smooth in my life 🙂 great haiku’s love them all 🙂
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Ritu
Apr 12, 2016 @ 19:49:21
Thank you Bee!
I know a little rough with the smooth would be perfect, unfortunately we can’t be the ones to choose that!
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Bee Halton
Apr 13, 2016 @ 06:45:29
It’s probably better that way 🙂
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Ritu
Apr 13, 2016 @ 06:59:49
True 😊
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R. Todd
Apr 12, 2016 @ 17:03:43
Smooth is very boring.
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Ritu
Apr 12, 2016 @ 17:13:30
Oh so true! !!
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rockcountyourstory
Apr 12, 2016 @ 03:00:31
Nice, I love them all.
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Ritu
Apr 12, 2016 @ 06:55:52
Thank you 😊
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Erika Kind
Apr 11, 2016 @ 21:48:38
All the three great takes. I love the completely different directions you took!
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Ritu
Apr 11, 2016 @ 22:02:57
Thank you sis! 😊😊😊I try 😊😊😊
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Erika Kind
Apr 11, 2016 @ 22:06:21
You did great!😊
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Ritu
Apr 11, 2016 @ 22:28:45
😊😊😊
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pranabaxom
Apr 11, 2016 @ 21:09:20
Wow! three of them. Brilliant.
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Ritu
Apr 11, 2016 @ 21:33:42
Thank you 😊
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Judy Martin
Apr 11, 2016 @ 20:29:11
I don’t know how you do it Sis. Three totally different takes, but ALL brilliant! 🙂
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Ritu
Apr 11, 2016 @ 20:31:56
Thank you sis! Written at school, they were, in my break!!! 😀
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Judy Martin
Apr 11, 2016 @ 20:38:11
HaHA! you mad person you! Very clever though 🙂
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Ritu
Apr 11, 2016 @ 20:39:45
You know when inspiration it’s. It hits lol!!!!
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Judy Martin
Apr 11, 2016 @ 20:49:39
I know and you have to get it down bloody quick before it disappears! 🙂
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Ritu
Apr 11, 2016 @ 20:52:14
Absolutely! !!
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incahootswithmuddyboots
Apr 11, 2016 @ 18:30:45
Very nice! 😊
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Ritu
Apr 11, 2016 @ 18:48:03
Thank you!
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