RonovanWrites #Weekly #Haiku #Poetry Prompt #Challenge #93 Sun&Moon

Monday evening, and it’s time to tax my brain with Lovely Ron’s haiku prompt.

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You’d think it was an easy prompt, the words Sun & Moon, but today, maybe it’s because my brain is overtired, I struggled… but came up with this.

 

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Image from Google.

 

Her face, radient
Like the moon when reflecting
The sun’s golden rays

Ritu 2016

27 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. imanikel
    Apr 22, 2016 @ 12:24:17

    And she made me smile…

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  2. New Journey
    Apr 19, 2016 @ 16:57:05

    Beautiful…..

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  3. jacquelineobyikocha
    Apr 19, 2016 @ 15:55:05

    Beautiful haiku

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  4. Jane Dougherty
    Apr 19, 2016 @ 14:01:11

    A struggle worthwhile—gorgeous 🙂

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  5. Al Lane
    Apr 19, 2016 @ 06:38:41

    This is beautiful 🙂

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  6. Erika Kind
    Apr 19, 2016 @ 06:25:10

    Overtired or not…. this one is amazing and for once something that connects sun and moon instead of separates them. A beautiful metaphor too!

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  7. amommasview
    Apr 19, 2016 @ 04:57:43

    Ritu, you are so good with words. This is beautiful!

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  8. Olga
    Apr 19, 2016 @ 02:22:56

    Beautiful, Ritu. I agree with Alok. I’m the same way. The muse tends to visit when I’m in a different zone. 🙂

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  9. pranabaxom
    Apr 18, 2016 @ 23:29:42

    And this when you were tired?
    The next one should be when you had a good rest.

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  10. reocochran
    Apr 18, 2016 @ 22:44:06

    This was wonderful and you added the word “radiant” which I so love! The moon, its reflection is from the sun, they co-exist in radiance! xo

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  11. Alok Singhal
    Apr 18, 2016 @ 22:08:07

    Seems your brain works best when you are tired too 🙂

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