Ronovan’s Weekly Haiku Challenge – Take 2! Sun and Moon

Yesterday I was tired, yet managed a haiku for the challenge

Today I was coming home, in the broad daylight and saw the moon out, as you do, in the bright blue sky!

Well, it got my brain ticking, and apologies, the phone photo isn’t clear, but here is a picture and haiku inspired by that sight!

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The Moon’s confused mind
Sent him out far too early…
It’s the sun’s time now!

Ritu 2016

Then I felt a Tanka coming on…

Staring at the moon
Wondering where you are now
Do you think of me?
I miss your sunny disposition
Your smiles would brighten my day…

Ritu 2016

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32 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. rockcountyourstory
    Apr 20, 2016 @ 18:47:34

    They are nice.

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  2. Judy Martin
    Apr 20, 2016 @ 13:11:32

    You nailed it AGAIN! Well done sis, these were both perfect, both the pictures and the haiku/tanka 🙂

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  3. Erika Kind
    Apr 20, 2016 @ 07:38:38

    Oh, such amazing ideas to combine both, Sis! I thought the same this morning about the moon as you wrote in your first take….. and the second one…. so romantic!

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  4. pranabaxom
    Apr 19, 2016 @ 21:29:00

    See what a good rest does to you😀😀
    And in response to your new haiku:( sitting in a diner after a good lunch)

    Moon was not confused
    Sun was lonely in the sky
    Begging company

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