Lovely Ron’s Haiku prompt this week.
Breathe & New
I went in two different directions today!
The first breath taken
A joyful new beginning
A cry fills the airRitu 2016
Temperatures raised
Deep breathing quickly shallows
A new climax reachedRitu 2016
jazzytower
Nov 21, 2016 @ 02:21:09
Yeah, that first one is as a result of the second one, lol! Love them both:)
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Ritu
Nov 21, 2016 @ 07:49:21
Lol! Yup… the circle of life!!!
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Judy E Martin
Nov 16, 2016 @ 14:51:32
Perfect, BOTH of them! 🙂
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Ritu
Nov 16, 2016 @ 15:06:13
Thanks so much Sis!!!
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Fourth Generation Farmgirl
Nov 15, 2016 @ 19:26:51
Both are fantastic!
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Ritu
Nov 15, 2016 @ 19:39:13
Glad you liked them Tonya!!!
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Fourth Generation Farmgirl
Nov 15, 2016 @ 19:41:23
😊
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Erika Kind
Nov 15, 2016 @ 11:08:16
Very good directions, both! Beautiful and intriguing!!!
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Ritu
Nov 15, 2016 @ 11:40:41
Thanks sis!😊😚
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Erika Kind
Nov 15, 2016 @ 13:22:31
😁😁
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Wild Daffodil
Nov 15, 2016 @ 11:03:07
Both exquisite!
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Ritu
Nov 15, 2016 @ 11:40:26
Thank you 😊
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Mother Willow
Nov 15, 2016 @ 02:32:19
Drumming does bring vibrations to creativity…. Great haiku, especially the first one. Second one is definitely drumming inspired….hehe….great imagery.
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Ritu
Nov 15, 2016 @ 07:47:56
Lol!! Thank you! It also contributed to the headache I now have!!!
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Mother Willow
Nov 15, 2016 @ 17:46:51
haha, hope you feel better today.
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Ritu
Nov 15, 2016 @ 18:11:26
Thank you! Still got the headache though…
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Mother Willow
Nov 15, 2016 @ 18:24:15
rest your eyes…maybe it will help….lol
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Ritu
Nov 15, 2016 @ 18:51:48
Hard to get a WP addict to stop!!
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Shivangi
Nov 15, 2016 @ 02:06:27
Very creative Ritu😀👏
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Ritu
Nov 15, 2016 @ 07:47:18
Thanks Shivangi!
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Ruth
Nov 14, 2016 @ 23:45:22
Lovely 🙂
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Ritu
Nov 14, 2016 @ 23:47:53
Thank you Ruth 😊
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willowdot21
Nov 14, 2016 @ 23:26:11
Not too far apart , those subjects! I did one on childbirth too, in my trio! Beautiful Haiku Ritu beautiful! xxxx
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Ritu
Nov 14, 2016 @ 23:27:44
Thank you so much Willow! Again, the drumming lesson was my place of inspiration!
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willowdot21
Nov 14, 2016 @ 23:29:35
Really?
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Ritu
Nov 14, 2016 @ 23:32:55
My Monday evenings… 2 hours of drumming lessons…. I sit with my notebook!!!
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willowdot21
Nov 14, 2016 @ 23:37:39
Well definitely the lessons are paying off!!! 😉
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Ritu
Nov 14, 2016 @ 23:41:04
😉😉 indeed they are!!
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dornahainds
Nov 14, 2016 @ 23:20:51
Fantastic series! 🌹
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Ritu
Nov 14, 2016 @ 23:27:02
Thank you Dorna! Two slightly different tracks there!
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Prakash Hegade
Nov 14, 2016 @ 23:16:49
The first one, loved it! 🙂
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Ritu
Nov 14, 2016 @ 23:27:16
Thanks Prakash!
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