Sacha’s back with her #Writespiration prompt this week.

Your challenge is to write your story using the weekly theme/prompt and write it in just 52 words…. EXACTLY, no more, no less.


Tell me the story of why this room is empty!


They took everything.
Not one fixture or fitting left to adorn the walls of this now bare shell of a room.
β€œIf the bank are chucking us out, we aren’t leaving a thing, not even the carpet!” Rhys exclaimed.
They left, but not before unearthing a floorboard…that would make them think!

19 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Sacha Black
    May 29, 2017 @ 22:49:31

    ah this is so close to home right now!! I’ll have to tell you at the bash! AWesome entry as always

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  2. dornahainds
    May 29, 2017 @ 18:14:20

    Fantastic payback! πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜Ž

    Liked by 1 person


  3. Judy E Martin
    May 25, 2017 @ 19:06:20

    Good one Sis, love the little twist at the end! πŸ™‚

    Liked by 1 person


  4. Erika Kind
    May 25, 2017 @ 09:20:22

    Looks like they were pretty well prepared… lol!

    Liked by 1 person


  5. Charity Mutio
    May 25, 2017 @ 07:21:26

    Cute. I love your thinking channel on this one πŸ™‚

    Liked by 1 person


  6. syl65
    May 25, 2017 @ 02:42:19

    Someone definitely got the last laugh!

    Liked by 1 person


  7. Adelise M Cullens
    May 24, 2017 @ 23:25:03

    nicely done!

    Liked by 1 person


  8. willowdot21
    May 24, 2017 @ 22:03:40

    Excellent, and true !! πŸ’πŸ’–πŸ’œ

    Liked by 1 person


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