Sue’s #Writephoto prompt this week:
Glancing up, all he could see was the fragmented lights and shadow pattern, projected from that chandelier.
She’d fought so hard for that monstrosity.
He was more of a simple man. No need for ostentatious decoration.
But she was adamant.
After buying the big house, she wanted it decorated a certain way too.
Renovations started from top to bottom. The money poured out of his account into the coffers of various designers and furniture specialists.
He’d joked to her that this move, and consequent makeover, would be the death of him.
He never knew it would actually happen.
Balancing that ladder to change a bulb on a chandelier 30-foot above was never going to be an easy task.
She’d been moaning for days that the light just wasn’t right because of that bulb.
Oh well, at least she’d be happy. He’d managed to change it, before feeling the pain in his chest started.
Stumbling down the ladder, he lay on the floor, blinking. The light seemed to dance around him.
His phone was nowhere near.
She’d only popped out for a hair appointment. She’ll be back soon, he consoled himself.
He stared up at the lights, blinking slowly, until the lights went out … forever.
ellenbest24
Sep 21, 2017 @ 19:57:59
A step ladder in time… saves nine. In this case saves lives. But at least she got her light eeeek! Great job Ritu.
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Ritu
Sep 21, 2017 @ 20:12:21
Well that’s true Ellen!!
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ellenbest24
Sep 21, 2017 @ 20:12:57
😊
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Pamela Morse
Sep 21, 2017 @ 16:44:41
wow, futile death ..sad commentary on keeping up with the decorator
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Ritu
Sep 21, 2017 @ 17:05:25
I know, a little morbid…
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Frank Hubeny
Sep 17, 2017 @ 00:38:39
Sometimes ceilings are just too tall. I suspect he would have had that heart attack anyway, but who knows. I assume that is what it was.
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Ritu
Sep 17, 2017 @ 07:55:05
You’re right Frank, some things are just meant to be…
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Judy E Martin
Sep 16, 2017 @ 12:06:01
A very original and creative take Sis. People and their ladders!!! 🙂
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Ritu
Sep 16, 2017 @ 12:10:11
Lol.thanks sis! Don’t know where my brain was headed that day!
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dornahainds
Sep 15, 2017 @ 19:15:38
Another Beautiful Tragedy. 🥀🥀🥀😎😎
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Ritu
Sep 15, 2017 @ 19:17:23
Tragedy indeed… x
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bibliofiles13
Sep 15, 2017 @ 05:30:01
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Ritu
Sep 15, 2017 @ 06:41:29
Thank you ! I have shared your post!
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bibliofiles13
Sep 15, 2017 @ 06:42:35
Oh thank you, you’re very sweet. 🙂
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Kurian
Sep 15, 2017 @ 04:28:18
Another beautifully written post Ritu
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Ritu
Sep 15, 2017 @ 06:37:18
You are too kind! Thank you so much!
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Kurian
Sep 15, 2017 @ 06:38:44
Remember I am following the best blogger. The blogger and posts I adore 🌹
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Ritu
Sep 15, 2017 @ 06:41:43
AW! ❤
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syl65
Sep 15, 2017 @ 04:20:37
A dark tale Sister!!
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Ritu
Sep 15, 2017 @ 06:37:00
A dark tale with light shining down Brother!
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syl65
Sep 15, 2017 @ 14:46:20
LOL… can’t help but laugh…poor guy ..
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Ritu
Sep 15, 2017 @ 16:36:23
😉😁
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syl65
Sep 15, 2017 @ 16:43:20
😁
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Michael
Sep 15, 2017 @ 02:56:28
Oh Ritu, what a way to go…so sad….I hope she did appreciate the improved light…
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Ritu
Sep 15, 2017 @ 06:36:34
I hope she looks at it and remembers him every time…
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Becca Barracuda
Sep 15, 2017 @ 02:17:29
You always evoke exceptional emotion in even a piece as short as this. I admire that so much!
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Ritu
Sep 15, 2017 @ 06:36:07
Thank you so much Becca! I think I have to credit the few word count challenges that I have taken part in to learn how to create that impact succinctly!
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D. Wallace Peach
Sep 15, 2017 @ 02:01:53
Grim, Ritu. The poor guy!
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Ritu
Sep 15, 2017 @ 06:34:58
I know… poor guy indeed.. I don’t know where it comes from..I’m a happy person… honest!!!
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D. Wallace Peach
Sep 15, 2017 @ 14:09:49
I can relate. I’m a nice person too, but the writing…. yeesh. 😀
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Ritu
Sep 15, 2017 @ 16:35:53
😁
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Aimer Boyz
Sep 15, 2017 @ 01:59:25
Amazing, Ritu. A few words, but a big emotional impact 🙂
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Ritu
Sep 15, 2017 @ 06:34:24
Thank you so much!
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vanbytheriver
Sep 15, 2017 @ 00:09:26
Oh, my. That deadly home maintenance. My husband was outside on an extension ladder this evening. I always hold my breath, but it doesn’t stop him, much. Good one, Ritu.
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Ritu
Sep 15, 2017 @ 06:34:14
Thank you Van! Its always daunting, isn’t it!
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willowdot21
Sep 14, 2017 @ 22:45:26
Fabulous Ritu, this is a cautionary tale. 💜💜
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